Forever Lost in the Cursed Forest
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Forever Lost in the Cursed Forest

All Rights Reserved ©

AI Assisted

Story Notes

Welcome, dear reader. ❤️

This story has lived in my imagination for a long time, and I’m so excited to finally share it with you. If you enjoy dark fantasy, ancient mysteries, slow-burn romance, political intrigue, and morally complex characters, I hope you’ll feel at home here.

Thank you for giving my story a chance. Every read, comment, and review means more than you know.

Summary

"The night her kingdom fell, Princess Elira Valen chose the cursed forest over the man who murdered her family. They say no one who enters the Dark Woods ever returns. Yet when death finally reaches her, it is not death that answers... But something far older. Something that has watched from the shadows for centuries. As forgotten secrets awaken and ancient legends prove terrifyingly real, Elira finds herself trapped between a stolen throne, a kingdom that believes her dead, and a darkness that refuses to let her go. Some monsters devour kingdoms. Others steal hearts. The most dangerous do both."

Status
3mo ago
Chapters
12
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Prologue: The Flight

The rain came down in sheets, each drop a cold needle against Elira’s skin as she fled through the ancient forest. Her white nightgown, once pristine silk embroidered with the silver Valenthose crest, now clung to her trembling form like a second skin, heavy with mud and rainwater. The fabric tore against low-hanging branches, leaving trails of shredded silk in her wake like breadcrumbs she prayed the soldiers wouldn’t follow.

Thunder cracked overhead, splitting the sky with jagged veins of lightning that illuminated the forest in brief, terrible flashes. In those moments of harsh white light, Elira could see the gnarled trees reaching toward her with twisted fingers, their bark blackened and weeping with moisture. The old legends whispered that these woods were cursed, that the trees themselves drank the blood of those who ventured too deep. But Elira had learned long ago that the only monsters in this world wore human faces and spoke of loyalty while sharpening their knives.

Her bare feet pounded against the sodden earth, each step sending shocks of pain through her legs. Roots and stones lay hidden beneath the carpet of dead leaves, waiting to trip her, to slow her down, to deliver her back to the man who had murdered her family. She could hear them behind her—the soldiers in their black armour, their boots splashing through puddles, their shouts echoing through the trees like the baying of hounds.

“Spread out! She can’t have gone far!”

“The princess is wounded—she won’t make it past the river!”

Elira pressed her hand against her side where a branch had cut through the thin silk of her gown. Her fingers came away slick with blood, but she couldn’t stop. She wouldn’t stop. She would rather bleed out in this cursed forest, would rather let the earth swallow her whole, than return to Swayen Corrin’s clutches.

Her father’s face flashed before her eyes—King Augustus Valen, with his kind brown eyes and the laugh lines that had crinkled at their corners whenever she made a joke. She remembered the last time she’d seen him alive, just three days ago, when he’d kissed her forehead and told her she was the light of his kingdom. Her brother Lothier had been beside him, tall and strong with their mother’s chestnut hair and their father’s gentle nature. He had promised her that Dominick would return soon, that the war in the eastern territories was nearly won.

“Swayen will keep the kingdom safe until Dominick returns,”Lothier had said, clapping the general on the shoulder.“He’s like a brother to us.”

A brother who had waited until their backs were turned. A brother who had driven a blade through her father’s heart and her brother’s throat while they slept in their own beds. A brother who had stood in the great hall the next morning, drenched in their blood, and declared himself the rightful ruler of Valenthose.

“Your father was weak,”Swayen had told her, his voice calm, almost gentle.“He entrusted his kingdom to the wrong men. I will protect you, Princess Elira. I will marry you, and our children will rule a Valenthose stronger than ever before.”

She had spat in his face. It was the most satisfying thing she had ever done, even if it had earned her a blow that split her lip and sent her sprawling across the marble floor. He’d had her confined to her chambers after that, guarded by soldiers who watched her every move, waiting for the day Swayen would decide to force her to the altar.

She had escaped that very night, with nothing but the nightgown on her back and a desperate hope that the forest’s dark reputation would keep the soldiers at bay.

Lightning flashed again, and Elira saw it—the river, swollen with rain, its waters churning white and angry. She stumbled to a halt at the edge of the bank, her chest heaving, her lungs burning. The river was too wide to cross, too fast to swim. Behind her, the soldiers’ torches flickered through the trees like the eyes of demons.

“Princess!” A voice called out, closer now. “There’s nowhere to run! Come back to the castle, and General Corrin will show you mercy!”

Elira laughed, the sound wild and cracked, swallowed by the storm. Mercy. That was what Swayen called taking everything from her. She turned to face the approaching soldiers, her blue eyes blazing with defiance. The rain plastered her dark red hair to her pale face, making her look like a drowned spirit rising from the river’s depths.

“I would rather die,” she shouted into the storm, “than let that traitor touch me!”

She heard the words as if from a great distance, and felt a strange sense of peace settle over her. This was how it ended. Not in a wedding bed, not in chains, but free. She took one step toward the raging water, and then the riverbank crumbled beneath her feet.

The fall was sudden and absolute. The freezing water closed over her head, filling her mouth and nose, stealing the breath from her lungs. The current snatched her body like a toy, tumbling her over rocks and roots, slamming her against submerged boulders. She tried to fight, to swim, but her nightgown tangled around her legs and her limbs were too heavy, too cold. The world became a blur of darkness and water, and somewhere above the surface, she could hear the soldiers shouting in alarm.

She sank deeper, and the last thing she saw before the blackness took her was the faint shimmer of thunder filtering through the churning water, like a hand reaching down to pull her toward the light.


The current was gentler now. Elira could feel it carrying her, cradling her like a reluctant mother who knew her child was too weak to fight. She drifted in and out of consciousness, catching glimpses of the world through a haze of pain and cold. The sky was still dark, but the storm was passing, leaving behind a strange, eerie calm. The water lapped against her face, and she coughed, spitting out river water that tasted of mud and copper.

She was lying on something rough and uneven. Stones, maybe. She tried to lift her head, but it felt too heavy, her neck too weak. Her vision swam in and out of focus, and she blinked, trying to clear the blur.

Slowly, shapes began to take form. Stone pavements, worn and uneven, overgrown with moss and creeping vines. They rose upward, turning and rounding in a spiral that seemed to stretch toward the heavens. She followed their path with her eyes, her gaze wavering with exhaustion, until she saw it.

A castle.

It loomed above her on the edge of a cliff, black stone against black sky, its towers reaching toward the stars like skeletal fingers. Torches burned along its walls, their flames flickering in the wind, casting dancing shadows across the ancient stone. Someone lived there. Someone kept the torches lit.

Hope flickered in her chest, fragile and warm. She tried to push herself up, to stand, to call out for help. But her arms buckled beneath her, and she collapsed against the stones, the impact sending a shock of pain through her battered body. She heard herself cry out—a pitiful, helpless sound that was swallowed by the wind.

This was it, then. She would die here, on the banks of this river, in the shadow of a castle that might as well have been a mirage. She was too weak to move, too cold to shiver, and the darkness was creeping in at the edges of her vision. She let her eyes drift closed, and waited for the end.

And then the clouds parted.

Moonlight spilled down like liquid silver, illuminating the riverbank in a pool of pale light. Elira forced her eyes open again, her vision blurring and clearing with each laboured breath. The moonlight was so bright, so pure, that it seemed to burn away the shadows. And there, in the centre of that light, she saw feet.

Pale bare feet, close enough to touch. The person they belonged to was wearing dark trousers, the fabric soaked and clinging to strong legs. She couldn’t see his face—her vision was too blurry, her head too heavy—but she could feel him standing there, watching her.

She tried to speak, to ask for help, but only a rasping sound escaped her throat. Her hand lifted, reaching for him, and she saw the pale claws—no, that was impossible. Her mind was playing tricks on her. She was hallucinating.

But then she felt it—the coldness seeping into her body as strong arms lifted her from the ground. The chill was absolute, a bone-deep cold that made her gasp. She was held against a chest that felt like ice, and she could feel the sharp points of fingers—claws—pressing into her skin through the thin fabric of her gown.

She tried to look up, to see the face of her saviour. But the darkness was too thick, her vision too clouded. All she saw was the silhouette of the castle growing larger as they climbed the stone pavements, and the flickering torches that seemed to welcome her home.

“Help me,” she whispered, but her voice was so faint she wasn’t sure she’d spoken at all.

The arms holding her tightened slightly, and she felt a presence lean close to her ear. A voice, low and deep, like stones grinding together in the earth, spoke words she couldn’t understand. The language was ancient, guttural, and it sent a shiver down her spine that had nothing to do with the cold.

And then the darkness swallowed her whole.


The last thing she heard before she slipped into unconsciousness was the sound of a door opening—heavy iron hinges groaning against the weight of centuries—and the whisper of something ancient and powerful stirring in the shadows.

Then, nothing.

Let Beeboreeb know what you thought about this chapter!

SimpleCrest
SimpleCrest

Your descriptions are beautiful without slowing the pacing. They add so much depth to the world. I also really like Elira's resilience and the creativity in how she escaped the castle. Onto the next chapter we go! ⸜(。˃ ᴗ ˂ )⸝♡

4 months
3
Cham_Churrail
Cham_Churrail

I like your writing style. It feels like some poetry, interesting one. And the scene about bare feet of his...........
I don't know what to say about it but it made my heart clench and the butterflies in my stomach to roam around.♥️

4 months
2
Layer's
Layer's

Forever Lost in the Cursed Forest is a captivating and atmospheric dark-fantasy story. The vivid descriptions, haunting setting, and mysterious opening create strong tension and curiosity. Elira’s escape and encounter with the unknown are especially engaging, making it easy to want to continue reading. The writing could benefit from slightly tighter pacing in places, but overall, it is an intriguing and promising beginning with a strong gothic feel.

3 months
1

Further Recommendations

The Rewrite

Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

tatianne Ingrid: Adorei cada capitulo! parabens

Read Now
The zatorian

lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

Read Now
An Irish Match

readingtoday77: This story is so very sweet. I really like each main character's emotional evolution, especially Liam working through difficult past betrayal and tragedy to be able to take a chance and love again. The sex scenes were fiery and tender and so very moving, especially the scene when Maeve says that she...

Read Now
The Full Moon Breeding Club

Susan Morris: This is a fantastic romance story! The writing, the timing, the flow, the characters were all great. I love the story because it involved a “process” I had not read about before in shifter romance and was well thought out and applied to this story. Cheers to the author!

Read Now
The Grumpy Next Door

mmurphy1008: This book had my attention from the very first chapter! It has romance and humor and just enough tension to keep it moving along. Can’t wait to read more from this author.

Read Now
The Orc's Pet

Glenda Holmes: Good read!

Read Now
Light at the End of the Track

Sonya: This was a lovely gripping and emotional storywith a brilliant ending

Read Now
His Silent Luna

freyia101163: Loving this book! Let me read more!!

Read Now