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""I've read stories with better premises that delivered far less. This one takes a familiar concept and executes it so well that it feels like the first time you've encountered it.""

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White Rabbit Down the Rabbit Hole

"I love this new take of writing and style. Besides the entertaining writing and imagery, using the technique of showing us and telling us what the characters are feeling, it is sexy and spicy and so much suspense and thrills. I'm excited to read more. I vote for this story and welcome anyone to come read and enjoy. The scenes provided are very cinematic. "

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