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sweet rain

"Full of ethereal senses and imagery. It gets you lost in your own fantasy world unimaginable otherwise. Symbolic of the medieval days of lore. When time stood still and fantasy was primal rich with Dragons and Myth. Folklore was the rule and dynasties made thru the might of force. Will and desire be damned. The hearty and the mighty wins all"

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Cool story!

"I liked the story. I wish I knew more back story on it,though. I wanted to know of Darvin and how he came to be and the other characters. Are there more stories that relate to this one and it characters"

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Solid Story

"A good work with great potential. The overuse of adjectives was a bit distracting; effective descriptions are succinct, not verbose. The characters and setting were well done, and the world itself felt genuine. A solid story."

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