The Star Map

"I love your story, Jen! I’m finally going to actually write a review now — my favorite part is Jake’s humor mixing with the punchy and short lines in the story. It really gives the book a page-turner feel. Also, the plot is really promising — a mysterious Star Map and a path walked before are very interesting and suspenseful. If there’s one thing that you can improve, I believe Ari and Lyra need more distinct voices. I love the dialogue overall, but Lyra and Ari sound very similar. Just something to keep in mind!💚✨💕"