Inkitt
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Awesome

"Can’t put it down"

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It's so compelling

"I love the chemistry between the characters. How she's trying to stay away from him and how he finds joy in chasing after her. Takes me back to the good old days when first love was all sunshine and roses"

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Absolutely hooked

"I read all 24 chapters in one day. I absolutely loved the Main characters in this story.And absolutely loathed the two villains.I can’t wait to find out what happens next. So please 🙏🏾 please 🙏🏾 update soon."

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The QB's Nerdy Addiction

"Waiting for more updates "

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Waiting for more

"Love the story so far, can’t wait for the next part "

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Ducks

"Ok, so I really like the storyline, but the ducks are killing me. It makes her seem extremely childish even in the middle of some explicit action. "

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