What is your opinion?
Good story line.
"I couldn't stop reading until I had finished the complete story. "
BROO
"This is by far one of the best things I have read in my life and I think you should continue writing. There are so many details, twists, and turns that I wouldn't have thought of in a million years. This is truly an amazing book and is now in my favourite top 5 books. I love how you think of the littlest things, like the description, smart comebacks, turns, etc. You have an amazing talent. Thank you for making this book...keep updating, please."
Hreat
"I think that this book is awesome one of the best I read in a long time just don't let the kids read it "
Stray
"OMG, this book was just added to my favorites list. Keep doing an a amazing job"
Amazing read!
"I love the pace and plot of this story! Some spoken parts are a bit long (like Ani’s past in the second or so chapter.) They could use a little chopping just so it’s easier on the eyes to read. But besides that I literally have nothing to say except that it’s an incredible book and you have a great talent. "
Stray
"I love this book. It keeps you on edge with all the plot twists. I love that it never gets boring. Keep up the good work, you're an amazing author!"
Great
"Great book love the details "
Connie
"Fantastic so far. Love kt"
Best thing I've ever read
"I love Mason and Ana I dislike Calvin"
Great
"This story was so wonderful, I don’t know if your an actual writer or not but you should be. Rarely any spelling errors,great choice of words,and wonderful plot"
You better finishu
"I love your writing but I’m tired of your stories being incomplete. PLEASE would you finish them off"
More???
"More more more for real need more! I hope you finish it!"
Stray
"Good novel.. Can't wait for the rest"
Stray
"Need to finish. Update book bout what happens. Other then that i love the story. "
Intriguing
"It is about bad and good things. I love how Lou came to Anastasia's rescue when Calvin was trying to do something horribly unspeakable and helped her. 10 outta 10 book I've read this week. 👍😄"
IDK
"This is a amazingly good story with a bunch of twists. "
Awsome
"This is a good book"
book
"Really good. If I ever find Calvin then there are more ways not even invented what I am going to do to that person that has no perfect strong word. Really nice other than you might have given me nightmares and I don't dream. Keep writing"
Stray
"Yeah, I think you've got something here. I enjoy your writing style and your narrative bubbles along and takes the reader with it. There's good tension and plot development. The story seems to be developing well. I think the text would benefit from a ruthless edit (which I guess will come later). There are a few unnecessary adverbs and sometimes the pace slows down when you offer unnecessarily detailed description. Sometimes, one crisp sentence can do the work of a paragraph. There are tense changes in the non-italicised part of Chapter One, from present to past. I'd also try and firm up the character of Mason and try to take some of the starch out of the dialogue. This may sound very critical. It isn't. It's the sort of thing you can remedy with a serious edit. I do think with a little work this story has potential and 3's will soon be 4's and 5's. I do hope this helps. Just for info my own novel can be found at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/thriller/225508 No obligation."
