What is your opinion?
A believable female protagonist.
"A story about a young woman trying to make her way in the world. It is written quite realistically, and the author has a good writing style. The situations she finds herself in are amusing but not contrived. It should appeal to young people. Personally, I found it a bit drawn-out, though not to a critical degree. Thanks to the author for the story, and I wish them plenty of inspiration for the continuation."
Reporting Oddball
"Is end already?"
I Loved It So Much!!! Definetly One Of The BEST Books I've Ever Read! (MAYBE EVEN THE BEST)
"I want to give you the review you deserve, I don't think I'm the best at writing these, but I'll try! First of all, I loved your writing so much, It genuinely immersed me! Esthers character especially. Honestly her jokes made me laugh more than a professional comedian, like HOW DO YOU EVEN GET THESE IDEAS!!! They are actually so funny. The sincere and unfiltered vibes we get from Esther is so great to read, its basically "beatuiful chaos" As I like to call it. Secondly, James is just... WOW. His character is just all over the place, and frankly. Im all for it! The way he thinks and describes Esther Is SO CUTE!!!! I definetly ship them, #Jesther💖🥰 Thirdly, The scenes overall are described so well that I could practically see it unfold right infront of my eyes. They were so Chaotic and emotional, Im sure thats what kept me hooked and forced me to keep going! Truly your strong suit! The dialouge was PERFECT!!! I CANT EMPHASIZE IT ENOUGH!!! You perfectly captured the emotion, subtext, and rhythm!!! I can't stop thinking about the chapter with Momo in it LMAOOO! It was a REALLY FUNNY chapter. I think I changed favourite chapters around about 5 times now.... Let me let you in on a little secret... I may have stayed up untill 2am last night continuing to read this untill my laptop died and I realized that my dumbass forgot to put my charger in my room and like a child I was to afraid to go out into the living room around 3AM! DONT BLAME ME ITS THE WITCHING HOUR!!! The characters once again were written so beautifully! For example, Elaina, SHE IS THE ULTIMATE BESTIE! I SWEAR I NEED SOMEONE LIKE HER IN MY LIFE! and the fact that in the earlier chapter you wrote somthing about James noticing brusies on her, and her trying to hide it with makeup, genuinely broke my heart. It's a perfect example of what I said, thats the subtext I meant! Finally, I AM HERE TO BEG YOU TO RELEASE THE NEXT CHAPTERS! WE NEED MORE! ITS A NECESSITY FOR MY SURVIVAL AND THE OTHER READERS!!!! IM SURE THIS IS ONE OF MY 2 FAVOURITE BOOKS!!! Please dont judge me for this, Im kind of tied between your book, and another book which was my recent favourite for #1st place. (It's "Desperate Sandre" By @Aries Paaris) Hope you don't mind. BUT GENUINELY IVE NEVER BEEN THIS HOOKED WITH A BOOK BEFORE!!! P.s: PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!! & Remeber that you have a gift that no-one else has! 🥰"
Good Story
""This is the kind of story that reminds you why you love reading. Beautifully written, deeply felt, completely absorbing from beginning to end.""
Refreshingly unique characters with unmatched charm and depth
"I am deeply impressed by the sheer originality of the characters in this story. Even though I’m only at chapter 6, just thinking about the book instantly puts a smile on my face. The female lead’s sharp irony and unique way of thinking crack me up, while the male lead brings an entirely different, wonderfully distinct personality to the dynamic. It is no easy feat to craft two protagonists who are so delightfully unconventional yet still capture such profound, contrasting layers of their inner worlds. I genuinely can’t wait to keep reading, but I felt compelled to leave this review right now because this story truly deserves to be read. Brilliant work so far!"
The Perfect BLend of Humor and Reality
"This story masterfully balances lighthearted, laugh-out-loud moments with the heavy realities of everyday life. The author excels at grounding the narrative in down-to-earth scenes, making the world feel instantly recognizable and relatable to the reader. A Clash of Needs The dynamic between the two leads is electric because their struggles are polar opposites, yet equally intense:She is fighting for basic financial security.He is fighting for the freedom to be himself and live his own life. The Final Verdict at its heart, this narrative goes far beyond a typical romance or comedy. It delivers a powerful message: life is ultimately not about the money in your bank account, but about the freedom and fulfillment you get out of it. It is a heartfelt, meaningful read that stays with you long after the final page."
Strong start!
"This is odd to a strong start, the female lead really seems like a relatable oddball, looking forward to more episodes!"
Reporting Mr. Oddball
"I truly enjoyed your book. The mix a funny plus reality was perfect. I loved that your characters weren't perfect or raise the expectation that people should be. The romance aspect of your book was also well written. I 10/10 recommend."
Thought--
"So far this is more than a cute romantic boy-girl story. Hope it it stays that way. "
