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The Pen is a chilling, psychological one-shot thriller.

"Ok, 'THE PEN' was wow, it was a chilling, atmospheric psychological thriller that turned the mundane corporate workplace into a claustrophobic pressure cooker. Built around an unsettling premise of unyielding perfectionism from the CEO. And the CEO isn't the generic evil boss, he has a deeply human, tragic origin rooted in severe trauma caused by a single mis-shaded digit on a critical exam, it was a tiny, irreversible mistake that derailed his life's path and this kind of caused for him to have OCPD (Obsessive-Compulsive Personality Disorder). My favorite part of the chapter, well in this case, story, is the following statement the CEO made, "They always told us...Life is written with a pen. A mistake written in pen can never be erased. So why should mistakes exist at all?" It was such a chilling closing line. Mia Vita! "

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