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Invigorating!

"I wasn't ready for this tale of woe and joy. This was so amazing to read with my being held captive, my inability to stop reading and my spirit energized. I wish I could read more, so I'll just have to read it again."

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Very interesting

"I like how you used colours as a way to sort of "describe" feelings. I actually have waited a long time for someone to write a novel like this because it's interesting and how I can feel the characters and what they go through in your story is just great. The fact that you didnt space the paragraphs bothered me a little but overall, a great book! Looking forward to your next work!"

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Amazing

"I loved the concept of the world, with the colours resounding emotions. I loved the idea of the romance and the MC in general. Furthermore, the whole passage was really well written. A beautiful story. Even the ending fit perfectly. There were some parts, where I thought Ethan's character seemed slightly irregular - from shy to confident to shy. Some reactions to situations also seemed somewhat realistic. However, this was a fantastic read. I loved it. Well done!"

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