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When our mother was dying [visualizer]
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Story Notes
For fun I decided to turn my story "When our mother was dying, we didn't do anything to save her" into visual story, story is almost done, but the visualizer is in progress, hope you enjoy <3
Summary
Finding out about existing in a DID system cannot be an easy realisation, but it is a one that has to be faced. Dealing with the fact of not being the main charater, with realising how many years were lost on pretending to be one person, with accepting the rage of those who are hurt and bitter - are all a challenge, but not an end
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Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️
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Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.
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Inkiminki: Read this twice back to back.... (and read a couple of the chapters several times - phew - hot stuff). Clearly defined characters. Great stuff
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PansyPotter: I liked that the main female character is written to be a strong and intelligent woman
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AARADHYA BAISLA: This wo soo so so nice I loved the storyline 👏💗
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Maureen: I liked how the author described how the characters were feeling. How there decisions and actions were influenced. This story would be a great movie, though I'm not sure how a movie could portray the emotions and inner thoughts of he characters as well as this story has.
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