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Loved, Loudly

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Summary

Rejected in front of three hundred witnesses, chosen by an Alpha King before the night was even over. Elara has spent her whole life being the sister people are kind around. Then the Moon Goddess gives her a mate and he rejects her in the middle of the Founding Gala, in front of his entire pack, for the crime of not looking like her sister. Alaric, Alpha King of Blackthorn, doesn't care what Ashford thinks a mate is supposed to look like. He's ruthless on the battlefield and utterly shameless in private; completely unbothered about wanting her, loudly, every curve, every inch Ashford taught her to apologise for. But a shattered bond doesn't stay quiet for long. A childhood friend who's spent fifteen years assuming the crown was hers. A sister who says sorry without ever quite meaning it. A prince who wants Elara kept on the side while he keeps someone else in public. A king who wants to reverse his own son's rejection the second it becomes politically convenient; whether Elara agrees or not. Elara is done being anyone's arrangement, consolation, or second choice. She's done flinching. Done apologising for the space she takes up. She's about to find out exactly what it feels like to be chosen first, kept close, and loved completely, unapologetically, loudly.

Status
Complete
Chapters
23
Rating
4.8 (24 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

The Gala

The ballroom of the Ashford Pack glittered with silver light, crystal chandeliers throwing prisms across a sea of furs and gowns. Tonight was the Founding Gala, the one night a year when every pack of the region gathered under one roof to renew alliances, exchange gossip, and, for wolves like Elara, survive being looked at.

She stood near the back wall in a dress her mother had altered twice, trying to make it “flatter” a body that had never once been the problem.

Her sister, Wren, glided past in emerald silk, drawing eyes the way she always did. Wren didn’t mean to outshine her. She never had to try.

Then the room went quiet.

Prince Kade, heir to the Ashford Alpha, was walking toward her. Wolves parted like water. Her heart slammed against her ribs; not from nerves, but from the bond. It had flickered to life the moment he’d walked in an hour ago, a golden thread pulling tight between them, humming with a word she didn’t need anyone to translate: mate.

For one foolish, hopeful second, this was it. He felt it too.

He stopped in front of her. Looked her over, slow and deliberate, the way you’d look at something left too long in the sun.

“Her?” someone near the punch bowl laughed. “She’s his mate?”

Kade’s jaw tightened, not with tenderness, but with something closer to disgust at being seen next to her.

“I reject you,” he said, loud enough for the whole room to hear, loud enough that there was no mistaking it for a private moment gone wrong.

His eyes flicked past her shoulder, to where Wren stood frozen with her hand over her mouth.

“There’s no way the Goddess meant this for me. Not when someone like her exists in the same family.”

The laughter came in a wave.

The bond snapped, not faded, not frayed, but shattered, a physical thing, like a rope cut mid-pull. She actually swayed on her feet. Somewhere behind her, Wren said her name, horrified, but she couldn’t turn. She couldn’t do anything but stand there while three hundred wolves watched the Moon Goddess’s gift get thrown back in her face like garbage.

She’d spent her whole life being the sister people were kind to. The one relative complimented for her “pretty face”, like the rest of her needed an apology. She’d thought she’d built a callus over all of it.

She hadn’t. Not for this.

She didn’t know how long she stood there before she made it to the terrace doors. She just knew that when she finally got outside, into air that didn’t smell like perfume and cruelty, she wasn’t alone.

He was leaning against the stone balustrade, arms crossed, watching the gala through the glass with an expression she couldn’t read.

She knew who he was before he turned around; everyone did. You didn’t mistake the Alpha King of the Blackthorn Crown for anyone else. Not with that presence, the kind that made every wolf within a mile instinctively lower their gaze.

Except she didn’t lower hers. She was too wrung out to remember how.

“That was unforgivable,” he said. Not to comfort her. Just flat. A statement of fact, the way you’d note that it was raining.

“You saw that.”

“Everyone saw that.” He straightened, and for the first time he really looked at her; not the polite, cursory glance people gave before finding somewhere else to be, but looked, like he was reading something. “He rejected a bond blessed by the Goddess herself. In front of witnesses. Do you understand what that means?”

“It means I go home alone.” Her voice cracked on the last word, and she hated it.

“It means,” he said, stepping closer, “that the bond is severed on his end. Not on the Goddess’s.”

He tilted his head slightly, and it came again: not the golden thread from before, torn and ruined, but something new. Quieter. Steadier. Like a hand settling on her shoulder instead of a rope yanking at her chest.

“She doesn’t waste blessings, little wolf. She’s not done with you yet.”

She didn’t understand what he meant. Not then.

“I’m Alaric,” he said. “And I think the Goddess brought me to this gala tonight for a reason that has nothing to do with treaties.”

She went back inside to collect her coat, her dignity in tatters, ready to disappear before anyone else could enjoy the show. She’d almost made it to the door when a hand closed around her wrist, hard enough to bruise, hard enough that she gasped.

Kade. Of course.

“Where do you think you’re going?” His voice had lost the slur of earlier, replaced by something colder, more sober, more possessive. “My mate isn’t going anywhere.”

“You rejected me,” she said, yanking against his grip. “In front of everyone. You don’t get to...”

“I get to do whatever I want. You’re still in my pack. You’re still mine until I say otherwise.” His fingers dug in tighter, and she bit back a sound of pain, refusing to give the watching crowd anything more to whisper about.

“Let her go.”

Alaric’s voice didn’t rise. It didn’t need to. It moved through the ballroom like a drop in temperature, and Kade’s grip faltered before his pride caught up with his instincts.

“This isn’t Blackthorn territory, King,” Kade said, though the confidence in it had thinned considerably.

“No,” Alaric agreed, coming to stand beside her, close enough that his presence settled over her skin like something protective instead of suffocating. “But I imagine your father would be very interested to hear how his heir handled a Goddess-blessed bond tonight. Rejection is one thing. Laying hands on an unmated wolf in front of two allied packs is another.”

Kade’s hand dropped from her wrist like it had been burned.

Alaric didn’t look at him again. He looked at her.

“You said you don’t go anywhere alone tonight,” he said, quiet enough that it felt like it belonged only to them. “So don’t. Come with me instead.”

She looked at the ballroom; at Kade, at the pack that had spent years finding new ways to remind her she didn’t measure up, at her sister’s stricken face near the punch bowl and for the first time all night, the choice in front of her didn’t feel like humiliation.

It felt like a door opening.

“Okay,” she said.

And for the first time since the bond had shattered, something else stirred where it used to be. Not gold and frantic, but low and warm, and entirely new.

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Maybe this could be the start to sth interesting and worthwhile for her😊

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