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A fresh take on tech and AI

"If you want a fresh take on tech and AI that has a classic science fiction optimism this is the story for you. Written in the contemporary one line graph style, the story so far explores the creation of an AI intended to be benevolent and help people solve problems. It also, like most real life stories, shows that the danger isn't the AI so much as it is the people who wield it. The main character feels very much in line with old school Niven or Heinlein era protagonists that rely on their intelligence, competence, and willingness to dig in and get things done more than brute strength or fantastical super weapons."

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He wanted to learn a future not in curriculums yet

"I liked Ethan's mind set and curiousity. He is selling a mission, an idea which is difficult. The pacing is great the snippets from hisblife definitly adds to the depth of his character. The pacing is good I want to read more for sure. "

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Epic story

"The plot of this story is wonderful , and Ethan's dedication towards his dream was next level and the hardwork they did was next level .Can't wait for next chapter the ending was quite suspenseful "

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