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Read the first seven chapters of this book.

"The premise is interesting and the heroine is not a conventional lead either..Looking forward to more of the author's writing."

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Recommand it

"I love the story , waiting for the next chapter 🤝✨"

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Lost in your love 😍

"This book is fun though l only read the first chapter, it is really interesting. A guy loves someone who doesn't love him. It's going to br really interesting. Well done"

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Good writing skills

"Your writing is good and creative I love it. It brings memories, create ideas and inspiring life for better chance and changes"

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I loved the writing style , the way you have established the characters the way u have written the dialogs in loved it

"I love the way u have written the plots the way u have established the characters in the first chapter itself with a tension. "

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nice

"Awesome. Got me intrigued from start to end"

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Chapter 1 review

"The summary of the story is welcoming and allows the reader to pursue every detail of the course. Chapter one starts with almost the climax of the conflict which gives the reader a peek into the action and dramatic behavior of the woman which attracts the reader to continue in search of: "Why the fuss." The paragraphs are arranged properly and legible. However, I think if the ending is more curiosity-intriguing would serve better."

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Lost in your love

"I think Nawal is a bit (actually a lot) naive here,like a confused teen. and she dfntly didn't like Kamran because Kamran talk about Rabia, not her. I am sure if Kamran talk about her he Dfntly gv a good vibe. Actually it's not matter Kamran likes whom, the matter for Nawal is that she is not the centre of attention. its childish. feel Bad about her husband cause he married her its not his fault or its nor his fault that he fall in love. Sarah is considering."

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Love the story

"It a nice story, I really love the writing style. I can't wait for more chapters."

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