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CASE 054: BORN IN A COFFIN, DEAD IN THE SUN

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Summary

Pebble is a quiet village girl raised in a deeply traditional household where her dreams are considered less important than the future others have planned for her. Gifted with extraordinary speed, she secretly discovers a love for running and earns the chance to compete at school. As expectations, family beliefs, and societal pressure close in around her, her freedom begins slipping away. While Dr. Edward Sawyer attempts to understand her worsening condition, Pebble finds herself drawn into the Veil—a vast, unsettling world where the hunt for freedom becomes literal. There she is pursued by terrifying forces while searching for a way to keep moving forward. Her story explores themes of freedom versus tradition, the cost of denying a child's potential, and the courage to keep running even when the world insists you stop. It is a tale about a girl born into limitations who refuses to let them define who she becomes.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

CHAPTER 1: THE GIRL WHO OUTRAN THE WIND

A dusty village lay beyond the city.

Small houses.

Narrow roads.

Rice fields that swayed with every passing breeze.

Morning arrived slowly here.

Roosters crowed.

Women swept their front yards.

Men prepared for another day's work.

The world felt peaceful.

Predictable.

For most people...

That was enough.

Pebble hated standing still.

The moment chores were finished...

she ran.

Across dirt paths.

Over tiny bridges.

Past old wells.

Her sandals slapped against the earth as laughter escaped her.

The wind tangled her hair.

For those few moments...

there were no rules.

No expectations.

Only the sound of her own footsteps.

"Pebble!"

A familiar voice echoed from behind.

Three boys emerged from a nearby path.

Each carrying homemade wooden racing sticks they'd carved themselves.

One grinned.

"You cheated."

Pebble stopped.

Hands on her knees.

Trying not to laugh.

The smallest boy crossed his arms.

"You started before us."

Pebble shook her head innocently.

One of the older boys pointed toward the finish stone.

"You still beat us."

She smiled.

A quiet...

almost embarrassed smile.

The boys exchanged glances.

"You run faster than half the boys in school."

Pebble looked away.

She traced circles in the dirt with her foot.

One whispered,

"You should race next Sports Day."

Her smile faded.

She slowly shook her head.

"No?"

She shook it again.

The boys understood.

Everyone knew.

Girls weren't supposed to run.

Not like that.

Not where people could watch.

The afternoon sun stretched across the village.

Pebble quietly hurried home.

Before anyone noticed she'd been gone.

Inside...

her mother knelt beside a bucket of clothes.

Her hands were rough.

Her back ached.

Yet she still smiled when Pebble entered.

"There you are."

Pebble lowered her head apologetically.

Without a word...

she picked up another basket and began helping.

The two worked together in comfortable silence.

The front door opened.

The room grew noticeably quieter.

An elderly woman stepped inside.

Straight-backed.

Sharp-eyed.

Every wrinkle seemed carved from certainty.

Grandmother.

Her gaze swept across the room before stopping on Pebble.

"You were outside."

Pebble froze.

"I..."

"You've been running again."

Silence.

Grandmother sighed.

"You'll ruin those legs."

She stepped closer.

Thin fingers pressed against Pebble's calf.

"So skinny."

She clicked her tongue.

"A woman's body isn't made for running."

Pebble stared at the floor.

"You'll need your strength someday."

Her grandmother looked toward Pebble's mother.

"You keep letting her play like a boy."

Pebble's mother quietly folded another shirt.

Without looking up she answered softly,

"She's still a child."

Grandmother frowned.

"And children become adults."

She turned back to Pebble.

"Girls belong in homes."

"Not races."

"Not fields."

"Not showing themselves."

The room fell silent again.

Pebble nodded obediently.

"...Yes, Grandma."

Later that evening...

Pebble sat near the window.

Homework spread across the floor.

She carefully practiced writing her own name.

P...

E...

B...

B...

L...

E...

She smiled to herself.

Behind her...

Grandmother glanced over.

"That's enough studying."

Pebble looked up.

"You already know your letters."

Her grandmother folded her arms.

"A woman only needs enough education to write her name... count money... and read simple instructions."

Pebble quietly closed her notebook.

Her mother looked toward her.

Just for a second.

There was something in her eyes.

Regret.

But no words came.

Night settled over the village.

Everyone slept.

Everyone...

except Pebble.

She quietly slipped from bed.

Careful not to wake anyone.

She carried her sandals in one hand.

Outside...

moonlight covered the fields.

She placed the sandals beside the road.

Then...

she ran barefoot.

The earth was cool beneath her feet.

The wind greeted her like an old friend.

No walls.

No voices.

No expectations.

Just open fields.

And endless sky.

She laughed.

Not loudly.

Just enough for herself.

Far behind...

the first rays of sunrise crept over the horizon.

Pebble slowed to a stop.

Breathing heavily.

Looking toward the distant hills.

She whispered to no one,

"I wish..."

Her voice disappeared into the wind.

She never finished the sentence.

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