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Looking forward to book 2

"Very refreshing take on werewolf mythology. Intriguing plot and suspenseful slow burn. "

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Great Book!

"I am truly enjoying this story. I love all the characters & their development & the comrodarie & genuine love & respect for each other. I am enjoying looking into this world & the sanctuary & the world of Rogues. I think the writing is compelling. It has great depth & I cannot wait to see where it goes!"

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When Fates Collide

"The story is good, doesn't end where you think it will but shows a realness that most of this side of werewolf fiction doesn't. I don't know if there will be a sequel or if this is the bitter almost sweet ending the writer leaves us in this world. I am interested in knowing why, why did the alpha of ironclad have such an interest in Noah's blood. How come Max has a brother and is the beta to ironclad. Is ironclad his prior family that moved because of the curse? I was even thinking the beasts terrorizing them were maybe people who took the suppressants and didn't work for them. That one day Noah's dad would forgive Max and maybe hand out his title to him so he stops being rogue, cause in werewolf fiction when an alpha fights another and wins they get the pack. The story is centered around Noah and Max's bond but so many things around them are happening that seems important but aren't really weaved through the story as it progresses. And we only ever got Max's pov when the heat first hit him. It would have been nice to know what kinda world is he keeping inside of him that makes him, him. Besides all of that it doesn't really take away too much from the story, just leaves you wanting more. Which is a good note to rest on sometimes. "

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It's a good read

"The kind I mostly look for on days when I want to read something soft and heartwarming. The writer did a good job as in writing characters that said wrong things, and wounds that stayed. The MCs bond, uneasiness and enemies energy was on spot (both are idiotically rational). The emotional scenes were beautifully written. but the playing tribute parts were painfully long (i skipped a whole chapter because it got tiring). The end was on spot (needed that) but why didn't they do anything about the curse, especially how it ruined Max life? There should have been something concerning that, explaining that, looking into that. the 'we don't know part' was off."

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