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"Starting with the prologye, I must say it’s a basic concept with uniques arc included. The novel would have been better in first POV as I see there is a lot of show vs tell issue which would have been greatly resolved if the POVs were changed. However, the story progresses greatly in the second chapter, adding a layer of suspense for the readers which is a good sign. Hopefully, the book will proceed even better than this in the upcoming chapters. "

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