Inkitt
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A really good story

"This is a really good original story. The only thing I think that detracts from it is the very abrupt shifts from scenes. Using some kind of paragraph break would help this a lot because sometimes I didn’t know what was happening and had to reread. Keep on writing though and I hope that you continue with this story and I can read the rest."

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Love the characters!

"So obsessed I haven’t stopped reading "

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La folie

"I am Loving the plot brave strong women "

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