A Bitter Brew

jlesiak

3 chapters read

Pastries and paramedics.

"Well, if I'm being asked honest, I don't like Jasper. I kind of feel this setup coming, because he just seems so cold and unemotional, but then towards the end, he's whispering something to Roxy, so now I'm wondering if he's messing the Roxy, I don't know I need the next part of the story And who was actually meant to die, because I don't think arlo was the target."

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Cook Killed at the Kaffeeklatsch

"This is a fabulous story, great premise, and Chicago! Ellie will be cooking with stories after this. It moves smoothly. readability is top notch. Details and Drama beat precisely. Let me know as the rest arrives."

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