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WAITTTTTTTTTTTTTT NOOOOOOOOOO I WANT MORE OF SECRETS THIS CHAPTER CANT BE THE END!!!!!!!?!?!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

"The story itself is BEUTIFUL, I love the story line and the fact that that it’s a fantasy story written in a logical sense the contrast is amazing✨⭐️✨🌟💫❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰 I would recommend this story to all who come across it, Secrets is a BUETIFUL fantasy movie, though it is a fantasy the story doesn’t maximize all of its plot and storyline on the soul concept of each part being extraordinary but it instead includes depth that logically reflects our thoughts and emotions when we are faced with challenges and how a person doesn’t always have to face things alone In “my” overall opinion this story is a 10/10 far outseeding the 5/5 bar set on the app. Whoever comes across secrets my advise is to not just read from the eyes but really get into the story and immerse yourself in it that you’re able to truly read and understand it from the heart ❤️."

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A story that makes you pay attention to what isn't being said.

"Secrets has this really interesting way of making the reader feel like there is always something underneath the scene currently unfolding. The supernatural elements are intriguing, but what really pulled me in was the relationship between Jasper and Elisha. They respond to fear in completely different ways which creates a natural emotional tension that I appreciate. One of my favorite things is how much the story communicates through body language and tiny actions. It makes there time together that much more intimate and real💗. I'm especially curious about what happened the both of them before the story began, because their behavior already tells me that there's WAY more going on than either of them is saying. "

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"So I really liked the start of this story. Loved the intimate moments. As well as the details in the writing. I can’t wait to read more."

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Elisha has legitimately made a masterpiece of a first chapter.

"Her imagery is really good especially when she seemingly hasn't been writing for a long time. It's highly immersive and her technical skills were also top notch. It feels like they're inside of some sort of dreamscape or something and I'm all here for it! Everything is meant to serve a purpose inside the story and even though it seems bizarre in hindsight it is honestly very healing. DUCKIE IS DA GOATTTT ❤️❤️❤️"

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