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Ekkkkk

"Great book! Cant wait for part 2!!! Ekkkkk"

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Awesome job

"Can't wait for the ending "

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Fabulous

"I like the story I just hope ur girl shows some backbone "

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Needs a lot of editing and proof reading

"It’s a very immature and clumsy style of writing. Lots of silly mistakes that an editor would fix such as “she grabbed the shit” instead of sheet. Lots of the story doesn’t make sense. The main character Gordon, you constantly flip between using his name and the name Greg. Lots of missing pieces that makes the rest of the story really hard to follow along with. I wouldn’t recommend this book unless you like feeling frustrated and confused."

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Started great fizzled out

"The story started out fast paced and interesting. By the last chapter I was more than ready to walk away. Tge plot became tedious and the characters stiff. Whatever happened I dont think the story can be salvaged."

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Confusing

"This story has turned very confusing starting like 7-10 chapters ago. A lot of misspelling, a lot of 1st pov to 3rd pov changes within the same paragraph and even the same sentences. The book started off really good but at this point I have no idea what’s going on. The characters names have changed a few times, the plot is not making sense and honestly it seems like it’s either a new author, a different book or a bad translator. Really disappointed because it started off really good ! Hopefully the author goes back and edits the chapters. "

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