My First End of Year Trip Disaster

Name: My First End of Year Trip Disaster
Author: Kelsey-Jo Holmes

Kelsey-Jo Holmes 19 stories

Mature

Story Notes

This poem captures the heavy weight of a sensory and emotional storm, balanced by the quiet power of human connection. It explores how a simple misunderstanding, expecting the thrilling rollercoasters of Blackpool Pleasure Beach but arriving instead at the windy, open seaside, can completely short-circuit a person’s system when routine and expectations break down.

What makes this story special is its raw honesty about the overwhelming nature of a meltdown, contrasted with the small, beautiful moments of empathy that kept the day from completely sinking. From the teacher who quietly offered a fiver for the arcades, to Nakita’s gentle check-in, Neelam’s steady presence on the coach, and Abigail’s unexpected hand-holding and kiss, these interactions highlight how comfort can be communicated without words. It is a deeply personal look at sensory overload, the painful struggle of feeling misunderstood by some, and the ultimate relief of returning to the safety of home.

Summary

This poem tells the story of a college trip to Blackpool on 12th June 2019, which begins with high excitement but quickly turns into an overwhelming day. Expecting to go on the roller-coasters at Blackpool Pleasure Beach, the narrator experiences an intense emotional meltdown upon realising they are only visiting the actual seaside and arcades, and lack the money needed for a ride wristband. Though the day is filled with sensory overload, tears, and a confusing trip at college. Despite ending the day in a foul mood and declaring it the worst trip of their life, the narrator ultimately finds peace and relief upon returning to the comfort of their home and bedroom.