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My First End of Year Trip Disaster

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Summary

This poem tells the story of a college trip to Blackpool on 12th June 2019, which begins with high excitement but quickly turns into an overwhelming day. Expecting to go on the roller-coasters at Blackpool Pleasure Beach, the narrator experiences an intense emotional meltdown upon realising they are only visiting the actual seaside and arcades, and lack the money needed for a ride wristband. Though the day is filled with sensory overload, tears, and a confusing trip at college. Despite ending the day in a foul mood and declaring it the worst trip of their life, the narrator ultimately finds peace and relief upon returning to the comfort of their home and bedroom.

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Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

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The Journey to Blackpool 1

The Tears Behind the Smile 2

An Overwhelming Journey Home 3

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