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It's good. The plot is nice. It's suspenseful. After every chapter. There's an air of mystery to find out what's next. It's good.

"It's good. Every chapter has a unique suspense, which makes it thrilling to read it. I am loving itt"

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When things worsen perception is the first thing that goes.

"An abiding, poetic journey to the self that is a revealing drama of self-precetion. I liked so much. "

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Suspenceful

"The question is...what is happening to emily. Is she losing her mind or is there something bigger, darker happening? I would really like to find the answer, along side the story. Personally, I love this story. Suspence, thriller, crime..etc just my cup of tea. Thank you author and continue writing!"

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