Effigy by Ravenhearst_0 at Inkitt
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EFFIGY

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Summary

When you've grown up alone, erased from your own story - no mother's name, no past, no one - wouldn't you be hungry enough to follow the first invitation that promises you a place to belong? Vlad Vandercoupe accepts an offer from an estranged uncle across the sea: "Your grandmother is fading. Come care for her - and claim what is yours." It's her only chance to finally know where she came from. Will she learn who she is... or uncover the terrifying truth of what she came from? Walk with Vlad as she peels back the lies that have wrapped Del Torre Estate for decades - and discovers some bloodlines were never meant to be found.

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

CHAPTER 1: A NAME ON CARDBOARD

Vlad Vandercoupe pressed her forehead to the plane glass, watching England fade to mist. Below lay Spain, her mother’s country. The one thing her father had never let her ask about.

She was twenty‑two, alone since sixteen when her father died. Six years of diner shifts, counting pennies, sharing a cramped room, never getting ahead, never getting answers. Her mother had died giving birth to her, so she was told. But there were no photos, no stories, not even a name spoken aloud. Just silence.

Then came the letter. From an uncle she’d never heard of.

“Your grandmother is fading. We are the only family left. Come. I will pay for everything. Help care for her, and I secure your full inheritance.

Vlad had nothing to lose... And a whole half of herself to find.

“Ladies and gentlemen, final descent. Fasten seatbelts please.”

Her fingers whitened on the armrest. The plane dipped; hills, stone walls, sea glint rose fast. She didn’t know this family. Didn’t know this house. But for the first time, she walked toward something that might be hers.

Wheels hit tarmac with a heavy thud. Passengers stirred. Vlad smoothed her worn jacket, tucked hair behind her ear, slung her backpack over one shoulder. Steadied her breath. Whatever waited, she was ready.

She stepped into the bright sun, scanning the crowd. And there it was: Vlad Vandercoupe, bold black marker on plain cardboard. Held high by a tall man with sharp features, dark hair streaked grey, and eyes exactly like her own.

“Vlad,” he said stiff, no smile.

“Uncle Lorenzo.” She stepped forward. They hesitated, then shook hands, too careful, like strangers playing family.

“Let’s go,” he said, taking her bag.

The drive climbed through olive groves and stone walls. Pine and damp earth drifted in. Vlad watched valleys and half‑hidden farms slide by. Strangely familiar, like a memory she shouldn’t have.

Then the road curved, and the house appeared.

Alone at the edge of a wide, dark lake, ringed by cypress and oak. Pale gold stone, steep tiled roofs, ivy‑draped balconies. Grand, ancient, utterly still. Like it had been waiting for her for decades. No neighbors, no lights, no sound but wind through trees.

“Welcome home, Vlad,” Lorenzo said, resting a hand lightly on her shoulder.

Her throat tightened. It felt like both a promise and a trap. “Thank you.”

The heavy oak door clicked shut and silence swallowed them. Ahead rose the grand staircase: wide, splitting clean in two halfway up, meeting again at the landing. Carved rails, soft light from above, like something from an old film.

But the air here felt dead.

High ceilings, dark panels, thick rugs that ate sound. Eight maids in crisp grey aprons stood in line. Their heads bowed, eyes fixed on the floor. No one looked up. No one greeted.

The quiet pressed so hard she heard faint pipes groan deep inside walls.

Look at all of them, Vlad thought.They have more than enough help. They don’t need me at all.

Lorenzo seemed to hear it anyway.

“Your grandmother would rather spend her last days with family.” He paused, met her eyes fully. “Than strangers.”

“This is the staff,” he said briefly. Not one moved. “Your room is this way.”

They climbed two full flights, then walked a long, dim hall lined with closed doors. At the very end, he opened it.

“Rest as long as you need.”

“Where is she?” Vlad asked.

“One floor up. When you’re ready, we’ll go together.”

“Thank you.”

The door closed.

This one room was bigger than her whole life back home. A massive carved bed, soft linen, French doors opening to a balcony. She stepped out: the lake stretched smooth as ink, dark and endless.

Too big. Too beautiful. Too quiet.

She sank on the bed, half expecting to wake in her cramped shared room. Pulled the blanket close and fell fast into sleep.

Until a sharp, heavy thud jolted her awake.

Vision blurry, she blinked hard. Something flickered at the edge of her sight, gone before she could turn. She breathed slow until her head cleared, then swung her feet to cool wood.

The walk‑in closet stood slightly ajar. As if someone had just slipped out.

Sunset painted shadows long across the floor. She pushed the mirrored door shut and looked: same travel clothes, dark wavy hair to her waist, eyes deep and unreadable.

A small, sharp smile touched her lips. Nothing will ever be the same again.

She turned, stepped into the hall and went to meet the grandmother she never knew she had.

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