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10/10 smashing loved it

"Very very good. Can't wait to read more of your writing. Wow.... apparently this has to be at least 150 characters. Well, it all started when I made a new friend who told me to check out his writing. And I have discovered that I love it and can't wait to read more of his very beautifully compelling soliloquies of this human language. I highly recommend you give this a read."

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Quite compelling

"Excellent work Justin Hunt! The characters are believable and the story is quite compelling. The ways the characters interact with one another is both typical and fitting of the fantasy setting. Well done on a successful 2nd publication! "

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Must Read

"This is a must read. The conflict is believable, the emotions feel genuine. Overall, this is a great book"

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Heart

"This novel has a lot of heart. It's a breath of fresh air in this world of cynicism and meta-jokes. It has the earnestness and sincerity that we needed in this trying time. Sometimes you just need to feel unadulterated joy."

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Super fun

"It was fun getting to know the characters and it felt like I was working with the characters through their problems. I can’t wait to see what else you have in store. "

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The World of Freiyon: It's pretty rad

"Having helped edit this story, I can tell you many ins and outs of it. It's a very cool story with very few real flaws, and I'd buy the heck out of it if I could. Justin Hunt is a master when it comes to setting the scene and atmosphere."

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