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Has some spice within

"This tome does have the makings of a passion project, the author has given this more thought than most; which I could appreciate. It a good low fantasy/ cartel and hommies with gronnies type of package. One thing I could say is that the MC could have hated their Ex a bit more. The world is heavy with lore, which I always love. Read to chapter 9. Not a tome for casuals A tome for those who love lore. Enemies to lovers/ acceptance always whet they whistle. Some paragraphs should be two, but what are we in harvard? Anyone that diss this because, needs to touch grass!!"

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