What is your opinion?
So Good
"I really enjoyed the eerie atmosphere in this chapter. The slow build around Winter Mansion pulled me in, and the reveal that the demon has been expelled several times but always comes back was genuinely creepy. Definitely curious to see where this goes!"
Confessions of an Excorcist
"I love the writers style, not giving too much away to build uo the suspense and the intrique. I cannot wait to read more"
Brilliant and hilarious
"Miguel's dry wit as a narrator is absolutely brilliant. Your writing style and delivery of humour are extremely accomplished and I genuinely cannot wait for more of Miguel's tales. I'm looking forward to hearing how the Marina Winter case turns out. This is absolutely fantastic work - keep it going, for all of our sakes. In the spirit of trying to be constructive rather than gushing in my praise, I've pointed out one possible continuity tweak that might be worth addressing in paragraph comments - the Winters haven't bothered asking for help, but Irish priests have been (and failed in the eyes of the Vatican but succeeded in the eyes of the Winters). Might be worth some thought?"
Child Possession 😱
"I'm really enjoying the story so far. This chapter definitely hooked me in. I love a well done possession story, and when it's a kid? Sold. They're always the creepiest. Also the little seeding about the family's secrets, killing me! I must know more. I don't always enjoy first person stories, but this one I've actually found nice to read. "
