What is your opinion?
The Last Shift
"Great wonderful work. Got a great plot, wonderful compelling characters and weird supernatural ending. However, I think the story needs more time to cook. Some times when I feel deep invested in the story, some few things in your writing tend to remove me from immersion. I am sorry for being blunt. But I love your book. I need you to return back and fixes those trip wire immersion destroyer. They are not many fortunately. Anyway, I am now following after I read one of your book, what is it call again? Dark? I think it's 'Dark'. "
THE SILENT OF SHIFT
"This chapter does an excellent job of grounding the reader in Erin’s world, making the dispatch center feel authentic, lived-in, and believable. The natural dialogue, small personal details about her family, and the anticipation of her upcoming vacation create a strong emotional connection before the main conflict even begins. I especially liked how the calm, routine atmosphere quietly builds tension, making it feel as though something important is waiting just beyond the horizon."
