What is your opinion?
Different
"This story is different in the way it is written and in the narrative used. Initially it is difficult to fathom until the rhythm is found and understanding is gained. This is about secrecy and misunderstandings, misuse of power and authority leading to feelings of anger and hate. Underneath all this is a spark of love and tentative cautious steps to fan the golden seed into life."
Confusing
"Contains a lot of back in forth in time for imagery purposes, which would strongly benefit from being in italics or some other marking to differentiate from present day. Also, and more importantly, them being wolves is an unnecessary artifact to this story that makes it more confusing, given that they almost never shift fully, all act scared at any sign of a shift like it’s unnatural, keep on suppressing the wolves and shifts, and own silver items for fun. It is a pretty good dystopian futuristic story, but should have just been left as that."
