Short, Sweet, Scary by Kelpie Water at Inkitt
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Short, Sweet, SCARY

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Summary

Collection of short stories and poems that might be a bit too short to warrant their own spot by themselves. Think of it as a spooky little ghost story before going to sleep! Don't forget to say goodnight to the thing under your bed!

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Crying in the Night {Flash Fic}

One night a child heard crying from somewhere in the house. She wandered the grand manor, in search of the source. Her little bare feet barely made a sound on the old, creaking wooden floor. In each room she looked, she found nothing-nothing but moonlight seeping through thin moth-eaten curtains or chipped porcelain sinks. Down hallways that became galleries for pictureless frames. But still the wails persisted, muffled behind doors and walls.

After searching for nearly the whole night, the child came across her father. Sitting in a room where the wooden stain was uneven in its coverage of the floor and darker in color. He was sitting on the edge of a little bed, something far too small for him. Elbows on his knees with fingers locked together and pressed beneath his nose. As if he were in deep thought.

“Daddy, who is that crying?” The little girl asked softly. But her father didn’t respond, his hollow eyes staring off into the distance. The little girl thought perhaps he didn’t hear her, but as soon as she parted his lips to ask again, the man spoke.

“It’s your mother,” he said. The child tilted her head; she had never heard her mother cry. Was that what it sounded like?

“Why is she crying?” she asked. The man’s body moved up, like he was taking a breath, still frozen in the pose, eyes still looking at something that wasn’t there. His body exhaled, but there no sound of the air escaping his nose.

“She is crying because I buried you in the garden.”

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