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Edelweiss

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Summary

Aria a girl who lives on the East African Coast discovers that she has Fae heritage accidentally. Then the roller coaster begins

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue: The Girl from Malindi

The salt of the Indian Ocean had a way of creeping through the shutters of Villa Lombardi long before the sun had fully cleared the palms. It clung to the wrought-iron balcony railings, softened the edges of the old plasterwork, and settled like a fine, invisible frost over furniture that had sat undisturbed for months.

Aria stood in the middle of the grand reception room, barefoot on the cool terrazzo floor, watching dust motes dance in the amber light of early morning. At twenty-eight, she had spent her life feeling pulled between two distinct horizons: the sun-drenched, red-dirt coast of Malindi, where her mother’s family had rooted themselves for generations, and the crisp, pine-scented valleys of the South Tyrol, where her Nonna Elda had been born. In her veins, the warm tides of the Swahili coast met the jagged ice of the Alps, a quiet clash of topographies that had always made her feel slightly unanchored.

Now, with Nonna Elda gone and the keys to the sprawling coastal estate resting heavily in her palm, that duality felt sharper than ever.

The villa was a strange hybrid of its creator's life—a testament to a woman who had crossed oceans for love and settled on the Kenyan coast without ever truly letting go of the mountains. Archways built in the traditional Lamu style opened into high-ceilinged parlors fitted with dark Italian walnut. Beamed ceilings crafted from mangrove wood hovered over floor-to-ceiling bookshelves lined with leather-bound volumes of Dante, Petrarch, and botanical surveys of the East African flora.

Aria took a slow breath, inhaling the familiar, lingering scent of her grandmother’s life: dried cloves, stale coffee, pipe tobacco, and the faint, bitter perfume of crushed damp leaves.

She walked slowly through the room, her hand trailing across the back of a canvas-draped sofa. The property was officially hers now—a sprawling, overgrown piece of prime Malindi headland that real estate developers in Nairobi had been eyeing for years. They had already sent emails, polished and urgent, proposing boutique hotels and luxury eco-resorts. But stepping inside the quiet house this morning, Aria knew she couldn't simply sign it away to a land surveyor’s ink.

She turned down the central corridor, heading toward Nonna Elda’s private study at the rear of the house. It was the one room that remained shuttered against the fierce coastal heat, keeping the air thick and cool like an underground vault.

The heavy teak door creaked open with a low, familiar groan. Inside, the gloom was dense. Aria navigated around stacked trunks bound in cracked brass and leather, edging her way to the wide French doors that opened toward the garden. She unlatched the wooden shutters and pushed them outward.

Morning light rushed into the room like a tide, illuminating a chaos of memory. The study was an archive of a long, eccentric life. Maps of the East African coastline were pinned over vintage topographies of the Val di Fassa. Wooden carvings of hornbills sat alongside hand-painted ceramic plates from Venice. Pressed orchids were framed next to yellowed sketches of Alpine edelweiss.

Aria smiled faintly, a ache settling behind her ribs. "You never could decide where you were, could you, Nonna?" she murmured to the empty room.

Her eye caught a dark corner of the room, tucked behind an imposing floor-to-ceiling mahogany cabinet. Something sat resting against the wall, veiled under a heavy muslin sheet that had gathered decades of dust. Unlike the other draped pieces in the house, this veil was secured with a silver cord tied in an intricate, double-looped knot.

Curiosity pulling at her, Aria squeezed into the narrow space between the cabinet and the wall. She reached out, her fingers catching the cool silver braid, and untied it. The fabric fell away with a soft, whispering rustle, gathering around her ankles like white smoke.

Behind it hung a large, oil-on-canvas painting set in a massive, hand-carved gilt frame.

Aria stepped back, drawing a quick breath. She recognized the subject instantly. It was a landscape of the Dolomites—specifically the Rosengarten group, the jagged limestone peaks that Nonna Elda used to tell her stories about when she was a child. The artist had captured the exact, fleeting moment of Enrosadira—the legendary alpenglow, when the pale gray rock turned a deep, burning rose pink against a slate-violet twilight sky.

The painting was breathtaking. The technique was rich and heavy, the paint applied in thick, knife-carved impasto that gave the mountains a raw, three-dimensional texture. The sharp spires of rock seemed to shear straight through the canvas, towering over a dense, shadow-drenched forest of larch and pine that filled the lower third of the composition. A valley fog hung low between the trees, painted in thin, ghostly glazes of translucent white.

Aria leaned closer, resting her hand against the wall to balance herself. There was no signature in the corner, no date, no monogram.

"Where did you get this?" Aria whispered, her eyes tracing the razor-sharp ridge lines of the peaks.

She had visited the Dolomites once with her grandmother when she was twelve. She remembered the bite of the mountain air, the sound of cowbells ringing across high pastures, and the haunting tales Nonna Elda would tell by the fireplace—stories of the Svanzies, the spirit people of the woods, and King Laurin, the dwarf king who cursed his rose garden so that no human eye could ever see its beauty by day or by night.

“He forgot twilight, though,” Nonna Elda had whispered to her back then, her dark eyes flashing in the firelight. “Between day and night, the roses bloom. That is when the mountain remembers what it used to be.”

Aria stared at the canvas, mesmerized by the intensity of the light depicted in the sky. The deep magenta hue was so vivid it almost seemed to radiate a faint, impossible warmth against her skin.

She blinked, squinting against the trick of light coming through the open shutters behind her.

High on the central cliff face, nestled in a steep, narrow gully between two towering pinnacles of stone, something looked... off.

Aria leaned forward, her face mere inches from the textured surface of the canvas. In the deep shadow cast by an overhang of rock, a small, dark shape sat positioned against the pale glaze of snow. It looked like the figure of a traveler—or perhaps an animal—draped in a heavy cloak.

She reached out, intending to brush away a speck of dust that sat near the figure’s shoulder.

As her finger hovered a fraction of an inch from the dry, cracked oil paint, she froze.

The air in the quiet study suddenly felt strangely heavy, as if the barometric pressure in the room had plummeted in a single second. The distant hum of the Malindi surf and the screech of the weaverbirds in the garden outside seemed to dim, muffled as though heard through a thick sheet of glass.

On the canvas, in the shadow of the gully, the fog shifted.

Aria stopped breathing. Her heart gave a violent, sudden thud against her ribs.

It wasn't a glare. It wasn't an illusion caused by the dust motes falling through the tropical sunlight.

The thin, painted glaze of white mist surrounding the cloaked figure was moving. It swirled gently, coiling around the base of the painted rocks like real steam rising from warm ground. And then, slowly, deliberately, the small figure in the shadow turned its head.

Aria drew back with a sharp gasp, her heel catching on the edge of the fallen muslin sheet. She stumbled, catching herself against the mahogany cabinet, her eyes locked on the canvas.

The figure in the painting was no longer looking down the valley. It had raised its face—a face painted with two microscopic, gleaming points of gold—and was looking straight out of the frame. Straight at her.

A sudden, freezing draft swept through the hot Malindi room. It didn't smell of the sea, nor of the dusty plaster of the villa.

It smelled of crushed pine needles, frozen stone, and ozone.

Aria stood petrified, the breath trapped in her throat. The canvas remained still again, the impasto peaks standing silent and rigid beneath their painted sky. But in the deep, dark gully between the cliffs, the tiny cloaked figure remained turned toward her, its golden, painted eyes shimmering under the quiet light of the Kenyan morning.

She touched her chest, feeling the wild rhythm of her pulse.

The house was completely silent now. And for the first time in her life, Aria realized that her grandmother had not left her a simple piece of coastland. She had left her a doorway.

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