What is your opinion?
The story is so good
"I loved the characterization. I especially loved the bond between the Mc and her mother. The author is really talented in building gorgeous imagery through their words. If you are into the fantasy Genre and love a unique plotline this story is for you. Great work Zia. "
I enjoyed reading chapters 15 and 16! :)
"These chapters were very interesting and full of action, and I honestly did not expect the death of Lucien and Elyra. I think that the story was structured in a very suspenseful way and was overall very amazing as the fight scenes and dialogue were well-paced. My only suggestion is checking the punctuation as some sentences were joined together instead of separate and making sure to check any errors with spellings, but there weren't many issues overall. I'm looking forward to seeing the questions that remained after chapter 16 being answered in the next chapters! :)"
The plot twists keep getting better.
"The Poison Heir is honestly such an intriguing story. I really enjoyed the mix of fantasy, royal politics, mystery, and betrayal. Kaelyn’s character has so much depth, and I love how you can never be completely sure who is actually on her side. The trials kept me hooked, but the recent chapters completely caught me off guard. The betrayals, the secrets, and that ending?! I genuinely did not see some of it coming. Definitely a story I’d recommend to anyone who enjoys fantasy with darker twists and complicated characters. I’m really curious to see what happens next!"
Unique Plot
"This story is such a breath of fresh air. Thank you for giving us something different. As soon as I read the summary I knew I was hooked. The attention to detail and the plot are truly a 10/10. Can’t wait to read more✨"
THE POISON HEIR
"I’m really enjoying this story so far! The plot has a great mix of royal politics, mystery, family drama, and danger, and the opening immediately made me curious about how everything connects. I especially love Kaelyn and Elyra’s relationship; it feels emotional and genuine, which made the ending of Chapter 3 hit hard. 😭 Vaelor is also such a good villain because he feels threatening without needing to constantly be aggressive, and I’m really curious about the Heir Selection, the poison, Aldrin, and what happened to Kaelyn between the past and the opening scene. 👀 The writing is descriptive and has some really beautiful emotional moments. I’d just recommend giving the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure another polish, because sometimes small technical errors interrupt an otherwise strong scene. Overall: A very promising start with a compelling plot and characters I already want to know more about! ❤️"
An Addictive Political Intrigue
"A really good book that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys stories filled with political intrigue! The story is truly gripping, with plenty of suspense, secrets, and power struggles that constantly make you want to find out what happens next. The writing style is also very enjoyable: the prose flows smoothly, the descriptions are well crafted, and the story is easy to read. A really interesting and captivating read that I thoroughly enjoyed discovering. There’s never a dull moment!"
Great start
"This is a really interesting start with a strong hook and an intriguing plot. The political tension and power struggle are probably my favorite parts so far, and the king is very easy to hate! The characters and world already have me curious about what’s really going on. "
Great writing 👍
"Good writing style 👍 keep writing "
