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A Ghost story with massive heart

" A unique, moving ghost story unlike any other. Do not expect a traditional horror novel. This is a gentle, atmospheric story about a family trapped in a happy memory, repeating a single moment in a field. When four young boys discover them, it becomes a beautiful narrative about youth and the human desire to not be forgotten. It is moving, peaceful, and deeply emotional. Highly recommended!"

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This was really good!

"The story was vividly painted through words for the reader to see. The prose is good and made the entire story effortlessly immersive. Awsome job! "

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