Inkitt
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AWESOME!!!!!

"OKAY ARIES??? 😭😭 I was NOT expecting to get this invested so quickly!! The atmosphere, the tension, the whole situation with her being injured and still trying to follow her orders while literally being hunted down??? I was STRESSED. 😭 AND THE ENDING??? THE PRINCES WANT HER ALIVE??? HELLO??? 👁️👁️ I NEED ANSWERS. I also loved the detail about the whale-oil lamp, it made the whole scene so vivid and eerie. ✨ This is such an intriguing beginning and I’m already SO curious about what happened in the queen’s chamber and why she was accused of the king’s murder. You definitely got me hooked, Aries. 😭❄️ I can’t wait to see where this goes!!"

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"After reading the first few chapters, I was initially a little lost on the plot, but I eventually understood the overall direction. I would like more detail about the world around the main character and more insight into why she was chosen and what led her to this point. I assume some of these questions will be answered as the story develops, especially since it feels like a slow-burn novel. The main character already has strong internal thoughts and feels well-developed. My main suggestion would be to continue building the world around her so readers can understand and connect with her more deeply."

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