What is your opinion?
AWESOME!!!!!
"OKAY ARIES??? 😭😭 I was NOT expecting to get this invested so quickly!! The atmosphere, the tension, the whole situation with her being injured and still trying to follow her orders while literally being hunted down??? I was STRESSED. 😭 AND THE ENDING??? THE PRINCES WANT HER ALIVE??? HELLO??? 👁️👁️ I NEED ANSWERS. I also loved the detail about the whale-oil lamp, it made the whole scene so vivid and eerie. ✨ This is such an intriguing beginning and I’m already SO curious about what happened in the queen’s chamber and why she was accused of the king’s murder. You definitely got me hooked, Aries. 😭❄️ I can’t wait to see where this goes!!"
For All Assassin Lovers!
"This book is for any lover of royal plots, fantasy kingdoms, assassins, and who dun it mystery. “The Sword Of Ice” was filled with fun and insightful moments. The author particularly crafted many of the scenes involving action and violence really well ! I appreciated how she didn’t shy away from acts of violence but kept it true to the story. My note to the author would be to broaden the connection the audience has with the characters and the world. World building takes time. And as much as I really appreciate getting right for the point (which I did like) there isn’t enough time given to those quiet moments in some of the areas of the story. For a specific example, regarding the 3 princes we, the audience are unsure of thier motivations which is an intentional choice by you (which I also like). Demonstrate to us more about why they are such unique figures to the story and how that relates to the MC. How does her years in service of the queen impact her experiences with them and the way she sees them? What is her connection to them? Does her years of loyal service to the queen, make her feel connected or indebted to the princes in any way? . You already have the makingings for such an interesting story! And there were moments I was so glued !! Really! This story really reminded me of Throne of Glass by Sarah J Mass. Even though she’s an award winning best selling author, I truly liked your main character so much more than hers ! I hope the author continues to share her skills with the world and KEEP writing. There is so much more excitement ahead! "
Good Read
"After reading the first few chapters, I was initially a little lost on the plot, but I eventually understood the overall direction. I would like more detail about the world around the main character and more insight into why she was chosen and what led her to this point. I assume some of these questions will be answered as the story develops, especially since it feels like a slow-burn novel. The main character already has strong internal thoughts and feels well-developed. My main suggestion would be to continue building the world around her so readers can understand and connect with her more deeply."
