I - LAND 🤯👀??
𝘐𝘯 𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘭𝘺 2027.......
•Famous kpop entertainment JYP and its old CEO park jinyoung is going to collab with mnet for a new survival programme....
•The survival show is I -land 3...going to start in march 22nd 2027.
•22 trainees were going to participate🎀.....but they still need two participants even after conducting a global audition 💯
CEO OF JYP: the show is about start but the rap and vocals still feel a bit empty.. 💯.... So I'm going to select the other two participants by social media and other auditionss...
*In Australia!*
A tom and jerry siblings (lee Rora kai and lee Rae hyun) were living there with their uncle 🎀 lee minjun. Lee rea hyun is a kpop idol from a group called "BLOOM".
Rora🎀: tian (rora's bestfriend ).... Whatever happens we always used to fight 👊🥷.
Tian✨: wait.. But whom?? 😅
Rora🎀: gurlll😖it's all about Rae!!
Tian✨:my god when he was here, you 🫵always fight 👊 with him.. And now you 🫵 are missing your lovely 🫀brother 🤦♀️....
*Announcement *
FLIGHT ✈️ NO. XXX IS GOING TO LAND!!
Rora🎀:myyy goddd🤯we have to check in 😭👀come on gurlll.....
~lee rorakai🎀
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STAYs where y'all at?! 📢🥹
First of all... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SECOND NOVEL!! 🎉🎉 WE CHEERED!!
Chapter 1 had me saying, "Okay... wait... THIS ATE." 😭✋ The title? Click-worthy. The cover? Straight-up eye candy. The description? Had me smashing the "Read" button before my last two brain cells could process anything.
AND DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON LEE REAHYUN. 😭💥
The second he appeared I was like, "Yep. That's my bias. I'm claiming him before anyone else." The aura?? The vibes?? The main character energy?? Bro walked in and my STAY heart folded instantly. He's already my favorite character.
The storytelling has that "just one more chapter" curse. I kept telling myself, "Okay, this is the last page," and then BOOM—I was still reading. Author really said, "Sleep? Never heard of her." 💀
As a STAY, I absolutely loved the atmosphere. It gave me the excitement of waiting for a comeback teaser—you only get a glimpse, but you're already making 500 theories in your head. 😭
One suggestion though! I think adding a Chapter Note with questions at the end would make readers interact even more. Something like:
💬 Who became your bias after Chapter 1?
💬 Was Lee Reahyun your favorite too, or did another character steal your heart?
💬 What theories are you cooking after reading Chapter 1?
💬 What scene had you kicking your feet?
💬 If you met Lee Rohyun in real life, what's the first thing you'd say?
Trust me, readers LOVE yapping about their theories and favorite characters. It'll definitely help boost comments and make the fandom feel more alive.
Overall...
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This wasn't just a Chapter 1—it was an "Oops, I'm emotionally invested now" kind of Chapter 1. 😭
Author, congratulations again on your second novel! Wishing you tons of reads, comments, loyal readers, and future fans. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
LEE REAHYUN, YOU'RE OFFICIALLY MY BIAS. 🫶✨
OMG CHAPTER 2???? 😭✋ I'M SO INVESTED ALREADY.
Author, why are you feeding us so well?? Every interaction had me kicking my feet and smiling at my screen like I was watching the best K-drama edit at 2 a.m. 😭💗 The chemistry is low-key starting to cook and I'm HERE FOR IT. The pacing feels natural, the dialogue doesn't feel forced, and the little details make the characters feel alive instead of just moving the plot.
The mentor–bias dynamic is literally carrying my last brain cell. 😭 The tension??? The awkward moments??? The tiny expressions??? HELLO?? I was giggling one second and screaming internally the next. This is giving "he doesn't even realize the effect he has" energy and I'm eating every crumb.
Also... author... WHO GAVE YOU THE RIGHT TO END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT?? 😭 I opened Chapter 2 thinking I'd read "just one chapter," and now I'm already preparing myself to binge. That's a trap, and I willingly fell into it.
The writing flows so smoothly that I didn't even notice how fast I finished the chapter. That's always a green flag for me. Nothing felt dragged out, and every scene had a purpose. It honestly feels like watching a K-drama where each episode ends with you yelling, "One more!" 🤧
Manifesting that my favorite duo gets more moments together because I'm already emotionally attached. If anything happens to them, I'm filing an emotional damage report. 😭💔
Overall: CINEMA. The vibes are immaculate. The butterflies are butterflying. The delulu is becoming the solulu. Can't wait for Chapter 3. KEEP COOKING, AUTHOR. YOU ATE AND LEFT ZERO CRUMBS. 🔥✨
"Such an interesting start to the new arc! The plot is getting highly addictive with the K-pop survival show element.