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REMNANTS OF THE LAST TIME

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Summary

Haunted by a flickering yellow light that never lets him rest, Miles believes he has meticulously murdered his neighbour, Vince, stashing his remains in formaldehyde containers. Yet, a surreal journey to a warehouse reveals Vince alive and making a deal with Miles’s supposedly dead brother. When Miles awakens from what feels like a bad dream, the reality is far worse. Vince is standing directly in his kitchen, and opening the fridge exposes not Vince, but the submerged, moving remains of Miles's brother asking how many times he plans to kill him. As the yellow light pulses continuously, Vince confronts Miles with his deep, suffocating guilt—painful memories of standing by as his mother died, leaving Vince to be beaten, and turning a knife on his own brother. Trapped in a psychological trap or time loop, Miles is told that to fix his past, he must kill his brother one last time. Driven by instinct and a fractured mind, Miles smiles unnaturally as a knock sounds at the door and his brother enters, restarting the gruesome cycle all over again.

Genre
Horror/Mystery
Author
V6_
Status
Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

I. Flicker

The city pulses with light.

Miles leans against the balcony railing, eyes drifting over the skyline. The neon haze of street signs. The occasional headlights cut through the dark. And then—

That one light.

Yellow. Distant. Flickering at irregular intervals, erratic, like a bad heartbeat.

Blip. Blip. Blip.

It looks wrong. Like it’s watching.

He blinks and turns away.

Vince is still struggling.

Miles’ fingers press deeper into his neighbor’s throat. A muffled gasp. Weak, useless hands clawing at his wrists. The body beneath him jerks, and spasms. Not struggling to escape. Just struggling to exist.

Miles holds steady, waiting for the moment when the struggle turns to stillness.

It comes. The hush of death.

Relief should follow.

It doesn’t.

The light flickers in his peripheral vision. Still blinking. Still there.

Blip. Blip. Blip.

Miles sighs and peels off his bloodstained sleeves. Rolls up his mess, carefully and precise. One leg first. Then the other. Cartilage pops under pressure. The ribs take more effort—too many bones in the way. Too many things inside that should stay inside.

Formaldehyde stings his nostrils as he seals the container. Piece by piece. Everything is in its place.

Tomorrow, the world continues.

He goes to bed.

He closes his eyes.

But behind his eyelids—

Blip. Blip. Blip.

The yellow light won’t let him sleep.

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