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Wanna see cassian dead!

"Still don't understand why cassian hates Elian.Maybe he's just an psycho. Can't wait to see how it ends. Hopefully you'll finish it.I liked how you have written elians inner monologue . I felt the fear myself. Great work."

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Wow.

"Ok first I may have gotten too caught up to do any kind of interaction but wow. just wow. I love this so much. genuinely I enjoyed the plot and the writing, everything was so clear. I love Elian so much oh my god I need you to finish this please for my sanity I need to know what happens next I await it with baited breath. I have no clue what to expect. I require more. please. I have stayed up far too late these past two nights reading this and I regret nothing please add more so I can do it again. :3"

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