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The red carpet

"I was enjoying reading. Very good book. It was short but very good story. Thank you, author. Keep up the brilliant work. ❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼"

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The red carpet

"This story reveals even secrets exist to relationship when in terms of good side. In this story of couple Mark and Bethany really convince me and attract me to think of it what will be happen in the next chapter. Through this story made you feel wondering somehow and feel satisfaction even if it is not your life, The setting of this story was very delineate appropriate to the story. The author used a lot of words that can be used to make the readers imagined what heppening on the story. And it was clearly stated with the use of creative words. The author used the first person point of view. The genre could also be common for many writter however during this story. And I really like the story, it is because the readers will feel that they are include on the story. The type of point of view fits very well on the story line for you could know what the character is really thinking, this story also has a uniqueness from the other story because this story makes the readers relate. Over all, the story can really feel the readers achieved satisficationand it will mark to their minds and wanted more of it.and I would like to suggest to the author to have an update."

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The Red Carpet

"Interesting to read about the viewpoint of being a girlfriend to a famous actor. Loved that the female lead had a humble background that brings out the best in her..."

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The Red Carpet

"This story reveals even secrets exist to relationship when in terms of good side. In this story of couple Mark and Bethany really convince me and attract me to think of it what will be happen in the next chapter. Through this story made you feel wondering somehow and feel satisfaction even if it is not your life, 1.) The setting is the one makes a readers excite for what will happen with it, In this story setting is really appropriate and very good. 2.) Sometimes the POVs made me confused to read but this story really convince me to read it well, but the problem is the POVs which made me confused a little bit. 3.) Part of this story which is made me attract to read it well is about Beth drives rattle and confused for what she will do for the event, It is really convince me to read untill the ends because of the good situation of the story brings me to be more excites to read 'till the end 4.) This very different for what I've read story before because this story really surprise the girl of what she knew about her boyfriend."

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The Red Carpet

"I love the storyline, and and the characters, and all. Grammar check though, I'm not trying to insult you, I just noticed some major grammar issues. I noticed them because I am a major grammar nerd, and I want every author to be the best! Great Story! But I suggest that you go in and just fix the grammar. You can also download an app on your browser called Grammarly that can help! Thank you for a truly great book!"

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Interesting

"Not much plot but philosophical "

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