What is your opinion?
HI
"LOVE THE WRITING,YOUR STORY HOLDS MY HEART "
VERY GOOD STORY
"It was an overall favourite by me and I think small authors like him should get more attention "
Good
"I don't usually read fantasy type book but this is good. 🤩"
Really amazing story by my friend
"it establishes its world building immediately and makes a very interesting world, very fun read. its a very interesting story and it has a lot of interesting concepts and creatures"
It Was All Kiro's Fault!
" This story is an adventure-fantasy with an easy-to-read and flowing tone that fits young adult readers perfectly, though fans of the genre of any age can enjoy it. The worldbuilding is open and creative, with high potential to become a full series. The characters are introduced through dialogue, and the five main characters are clearly distinct from each other, each with their own personality. The reader explores and discovers alongside the characters, and sometime, they might even feel like the sixth member of the group. The story follows a familiar structure and stays true to its genre. 🔷️ Strengths: 🔹️Creative worldbuilding 🔹️Exploratory adventure 🔹️Character development through dialogue 🔹️Good pacing for the adventure genre 🔹️High potential to stand out in young adult literature 🔶️ Weaknesses: 🔸️Visual descriptions could be richer 🔸️Chapter one carries a heavy load of information; it might work better as a prologue 🔸️Some chapters feel a bit short With a bit of editing, this story could become a solid entry in its genre. And with more chapters and regular updates, it will definitely be a good choice for fans of this type of story."
