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PLEASE COME COLLECT YOUR DAUGHTER

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Summary

At twenty-four, Lin Anya discovers she was switched at birth—and that her biological family is wealthy enough to believe everyone wants what they have. The Shengs expect a tearful reunion. They expect gratitude, jealousy, and a desperate fight for their affection. Anya wants lunch. Practical, sarcastic, and impossible to embarrass, she has no interest in competing with Sheng Lili, the beloved daughter raised in her place. Her rule is simple: treat her well, and she will do the same. Deliberately hurt her, and she will respond immediately. But Lili cannot tolerate a rival who refuses to compete. Her schemes grow from tearful accusations to planted evidence and public traps designed to make Anya look cruel. Meanwhile, charming heir Lu Caiyun approaches Anya because of an arrogant bet, convinced he can make her fall for him. Instead, Anya remains exactly herself—and Caiyun becomes the one who softens. Then Anya discovers the hospital switch may not have remained an innocent mistake. Someone knew the truth years ago and allowed two daughters, two mothers, and an entire family to live inside a lie. Anya did not return for revenge or to beg for love. She came peacefully. Unfortunately, the Sheng family refused to leave her that way. No rebirth. No ninety-nine chances. No suffering in silence.

Status
Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
5.0 (6 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Three Cars

The Sheng family sent three cars to collect Lin Anya.

She took the bus.

This was not a statement.

The number 47 stopped two streets from her apartment, crossed the river without changing routes, and left her a ten-minute walk from the Sheng estate. It cost two coins. Anya understood all of these things.

The Sheng family’s arrangements were less clear.

At eleven that morning, a driver had called the restaurant and asked the manager to send Miss Sheng outside. A second driver had gone to Anya’s apartment after she had already left for work. A third had waited at the university she had graduated from two years earlier, apparently hoping education was a place people remained until collected by wealthier relatives.

Anya had finished her shift, changed out of her uniform, and walked to the bus stop.

She was not avoiding them. They simply kept going to places where she was not.

The bus smelled faintly of warm vinyl, rain-damp coats, and the scallion pancakes a schoolboy was eating three rows ahead. Anya stood for the first twelve minutes, one hand looped around an overhead strap while the city moved past the windows in grey afternoon light.

Her phone vibrated inside her worn leather bag.

UNKNOWN DRIVER, said the screen.

She let it ring.

The message that followed said:

Miss Sheng, please advise your present location.

Anya looked at the name for several seconds.

Then she typed:

Lin Anya is on the bus.

The reply arrived almost immediately.

Please remain where you are. We will collect you.

The bus entered an underpass.

Anya put the phone away.

Remaining where she was would have required asking the driver to stop moving. That seemed excessive even for the Sheng family.

At the next interchange, a woman carrying grocery bags stood. Anya took the empty seat and rested her canvas tote on her knees. Inside were a clean work shirt, a paperback with a bent spine, her charger, and the DNA report that had rearranged her family eight days earlier without changing a single person she loved.

The report used the phrase probability of biological maternity.

It did not mention who had packed her school lunches, worked overtime to pay for braces, or stayed awake beside her during a fever when she was nine.

It did not mention love at all.

Paperwork had limits.

The bus climbed toward the northern district, where apartment blocks thinned into walled estates. Storefronts disappeared. Sidewalks widened and emptied, apparently because people with large houses had nowhere to walk.

Anya got off at the final stop.

A fruit seller beside the station was packing away his crates. Four peaches remained in a shallow wooden box, their skins bruised in small places but still fragrant.

“Last ones,” he said. “Half price.”

Anya bought one.

By the time the Shengs discovered that all three cars had failed, she was standing outside their front gate with the peach in one hand and her cracked phone in the other.

The gate was taller than the building where she rented her apartment. Black iron spears rose above pale stone walls. A camera turned toward her with a small mechanical sound.

The guard stepped out of the booth.

His gaze moved from her old sneakers to the oversized jacket, the canvas tote, and finally her face.

“Deliveries use the east entrance.”

Anya took another bite of peach. Juice touched her thumb.

“I’m not delivering anything.”

The guard frowned. “Then your name?”

“Lin Anya.”

His expression changed.

Only slightly, but Anya had spent six years carrying plates between tables. She knew the exact look people wore when they had just realized they might have been rude to someone important.

His shoulders straightened. “Miss Sheng, I apologize. We were expecting—”

“Lin,” she said.

“Pardon?”

“My name is Lin Anya.” She wiped the peach juice against a folded napkin. “You asked.”

The gates opened without a sound.

The house waited at the end of a long drive lined with gingko trees. Pale stone. Three floors. Too many windows. The western glass reflected a sky turning silver before rain.

It took Anya four minutes to walk from the gate to the front steps. The house grew larger as she approached, which seemed unnecessary.

Two stone lions guarded the entrance with the solemnity of creatures who had never paid rent.

A black sedan swept past her and stopped beneath the portico.

The rear door opened before the driver reached it. A tall man in a charcoal suit stepped out, glanced toward the entrance, then noticed Anya halfway up the drive.

He stopped.

He had the severe eyebrows of the man in the investigator’s photographs. Her biological father’s eyebrows, apparently. An unfortunate inheritance.

“Lin Anya?” he called.

She stopped chewing.

He came toward her with the brisk, irritated stride of someone accustomed to meetings beginning when he entered the room. His tie was still straight. His silver watch caught the dull afternoon light.

“I’m Sheng Rui.”

Anya waited.

His mouth tightened. “Your eldest brother.”

“I understood the surname.”

His gaze dropped to her tote. “Where is your luggage?”

“At home.”

“This is your home.”

Anya looked past him at the house, then back at his face.

“I’ve been here forty seconds.”

“Mother told you to bring your things.”

“She told me to come for lunch.”

Rui took out his phone, checked a message, and frowned as though the device had personally betrayed him.

“The cars couldn’t find you.”

“I wasn’t lost.”

“You were supposed to wait at the restaurant.”

“My shift ended.”

“You could have called.”

Anya held up her cracked phone. “So could the three drivers.”

For a moment, neither of them spoke.

Wind moved through the gingko leaves. Somewhere beyond the wall, thunder rolled too far away to be urgent.

Then the front doors opened and a young woman hurried down the steps.

She was beautiful in the careful way of an expensive room: every color soft, every detail precisely placed. Her cream dress moved around her knees. Chestnut curls lay over one shoulder, and pearls shone at her ears.

She passed Rui and stopped a few feet from Anya.

Her eyes were already wet.

Impressive, Anya thought. They had not even said hello.

“Sister.”

Anya glanced behind herself.

No one.

She pointed at her own chest. “Me?”

The girl’s lashes trembled. “I’m Sheng Lili.”

“I know.”

The investigator had provided a photograph. The photograph had not conveyed how fragile Lili looked while standing perfectly upright in shoes that probably cost more than Anya’s monthly rent.

Lili stepped closer, then stopped at exactly the distance where an embrace could be offered without being attempted.

“I’ve wanted to meet you for so long.”

“The test came back eight days ago.”

Something flickered across Lili’s face and vanished beneath a small, brave smile.

Behind her, Rui’s expression hardened.

Anya rubbed the fuzz from the peach with her thumb. Apparently eight days had been the wrong answer.

Lili looked at the tote. “You didn’t bring your belongings?”

“No.”

“But you’re staying, aren’t you?”

“For lunch.”

Lili’s smile failed.

Rui stepped in. “Can we discuss this inside instead of performing on the driveway?”

Anya looked around. The guard had returned to his booth. The sedan driver was studying the windshield with unusual concentration. A woman in a grey uniform stood between the open doors.

“Who’s performing?” Anya asked.

Rui stared at her.

She finished the peach.

Inside, the air was cool enough to raise gooseflesh along her arms. The entrance hall smelled of beeswax, cut flowers, and the faint mineral scent that arrived before rain. Light from the chandelier fractured across the polished marble floor. A staircase curved toward the second level, wide enough for six people to descend while avoiding one another emotionally.

The woman in grey approached and held out her hand for Anya’s tote.

“I can carry it,” Anya said.

The woman blinked, then smiled. “Of course, Miss Lin. I’m Qiao Fen, the housekeeper.”

“Thank you, Auntie Qiao. Where should I put this?”

Anya held up the peach stone.

Qiao Fen took it with both hands, as if Anya had entrusted her with a minor family heirloom. “I’ll dispose of it.”

“Thanks.”

Lili watched the exchange. So did Rui.

Anya wondered which rule she had broken.

They passed a console table carrying a bowl of white peonies, then crossed a sitting room where no one appeared to have sat in years. The pale sofas were arranged around a low table with the exact symmetry of a furniture catalogue.

At the far end, a woman rose.

Anya had seen her face before—first in the investigator’s file, then in the mirror afterward.

Madam Sheng was fifty-two and beautiful, with dark hair pinned at the nape of her neck and posture that made the room seem untidy around her. A white handkerchief had been folded into one hand so tightly that the embroidered corner disappeared between her fingers.

For one strange second, nobody moved.

Anya saw her own eyes in the woman’s face. Not the shape. The way they narrowed when uncertain. The small line between the brows when she wanted more information than she had been given.

The recognition landed lower than thought, somewhere behind Anya’s ribs.

She disliked that immediately.

The resemblance did not feel like love. It felt like finding handwriting that matched hers in a book she had never opened.

Madam Sheng crossed the room.

“Anya.” Her voice broke on the second syllable.

Anya saw the embrace forming too late to prevent it politely.

The woman smelled faintly of sandalwood. Her arms were rigid around Anya’s shoulders, trembling with an emotion too large and too private to belong to both of them.

Anya let the hug happen.

She even patted Madam Sheng once between the shoulder blades.

After several seconds, breathing became inconvenient.

“I need air.”

Madam Sheng released her as though burned. “I’m sorry. I only—when I saw you—”

“It’s fine.” Anya adjusted her jacket. “Just warn me next time.”

Pain passed over the woman’s face.

They had known each other for less than a minute, and already Anya had disappointed her.

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