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Never Yours

"The first chapter is a brilliant start to the book. I like the way it describes everything. Despite it's the beginning I feel it already tells a story. The name Jeff reminds me of Jeff the Killer from The Creepypastas. We all know when that was popular. The story Jeff wrote is understandable. The story also tells, even the slightest bit of actions towards someone matters. What I notice about Jeff is he seems to focus on others more than himself. Typically, with people, they focus on other's problems to keep their mind occupied. It distracts them from their own problems. The character development is great. The two last sentences from chapter three are undeniably very true. That bit in chapter five hurt. Overall, one of my favourites. It's pretty good just depressing a bit especially at the end. <3"

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Quite an emotional story.

"The length of the story may be small. But it carried a lot of emotions in a natural and balanced way. I personally don't reallyyy like romance but this bittersweet story changed it. This also tells that not every love story has a happy ending! :) "

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I loved everything about it but it wasn't lengthy enough

"I love it but it wasn't lengthy enough "

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