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Daphne

"Just tell him you want him, u want to stay!"

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Good book

"Almost doneeee. Such a good book"

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His to own

"Please give us more content love the story thus far."

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Cum for daddy

"Ooooh waiting for more 😍🌶️ "

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Interesting plot, steamy sex scenes

"Overall the plot is good. Sometimes some holes like something was missed from one chapter to the next. The grammar (especially the syntax) needs a lot of work. I'm typically able to put together what is meant but there are a lot of strange word orders and words missing. I do think it's worth the read though. The sex scenes get very steamy and the plot leaves you wanting more. "

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Not too bad

"I like the book so far. It is interesting. I am curious if her uncle will ever get the money to pay him"

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