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"Please update... I want to know what happens next!!!! "

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An enthralling fantasy story

"My initial thoughts after reading. Firstly, poor Juliette, can she ever catch a break? Sir Armand, please come back. Vaelric is a charming, but dangerous character I must know more about. Can Edric please die already, and let it be painful, please. A gripping fantasy story that is not yet finished (though I hope to see more chapters in the near future......) The author has created a captivating world of people, lore and lilting prose. All 17 Chapters are read, and I can't wait for more. Keep on writing!"

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