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A Collection of Poems Exploring Dark & Negative Emotions

"This is a collection of beautifully written poems, showcasing different, dark or negative emotions of a broken mind. Okay, I gotta commend the style first, because this is what stood out for me. Each poem has its own rhythm, own pattern, own length, as well as its own, unique side that it showcases. Honestly, it was pretty thrilling to read this, as you wouldn't know what you will get each time you press on that "next chapter" button, hahaha. The technical side needs some improvement, though. Some punctuation polishes, like missing commas, and possessive nouns turning into contraction (like your to you're) should be corrected. But then again, maybe that was intentional, since the theme is a broken mind. XD Overall, if you love reading a collection of dark poems that showcases different, unique sides of a broken mind, then I HIGHLY recommend this one. "

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