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Great book

"I really enjoyed the plot and found the story interesting enough to keep me reading. However, I would have loved to see Vael finally show some genuine emotion and become more expressive. I also wish Visera would develop a stronger backbone and stand up for herself more. I think these character developments would make the story even more satisfying. Overall, I enjoyed the storyline, but I’m hoping to see more character growth and emotional depth as the story progresses."

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Can’t wait for more

"Please keep writing I love this story really really want these too to end up together and happy!!!!!!!"

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Steamy romance

"Love, love, love your book and the characters you have developed! A perfect match and I cannot wait until they are together forever 🔥 Thank you so very much for sharing your talent ! "

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Her first sexual experience

"I hope he doesnt blame her because he forgot the condom. If she gets pregnant he only has hiself to blame."

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