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"I really enjoyed this opening, especially the childhood connection between Luca and Jayden and Luca’s determination to attend Blackwood Academy. The contrast between Luca’s scholarship background and the wealthy world of Blackwood creates an interesting source of conflict, while the bracelet from his sister adds a sweet emotional touch. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens when Luca finally comes face-to-face with Jayden again and whether Jayden remembers their first kiss. "

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