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Hidden Hollow

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Summary

When a machine breaks time, a group of tennagers must uncover the secrets lurking in their neighbourhood.

Status
2mo ago
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

THE STILLNESS

The machine had never reached ninety percent before. It was a lattice of black metal and tempered glass, veined with cables that pulsed with a low, steady light. The air around it tasted of ozone and cold metal.

Dr. Collins stood on the observation platform with his hands behind his back. Below, three technicians moved through the final sequence.

“Containment field stable,” one of them said.

“Singularity threshold at ninety-four percent.”

Collins gave a nod. “Activate.”

A deep vibration moved through the floor. The lattice brightened. The core began to bloom. The lights in the chamber flickered once.

Above ground, the quiet night of King Street stopped. Rain hung motionless in the air. A streetlight’s glow froze mid-spill across the wet asphalt. In the distance, the usual sounds of the city, generators, distant traffic, a dog barking, vanished as if someone had pressed a hand over the world’s mouth.

Ibrahim ran across the street, his legs moving before his mind, his breathing heavy. Akionla followed suit.

“Akionla! Why you dey run?”

Akionla gave no answer.

Have the police caught us again? Why’s he running like this?

“What is this!?” Ibrahim stared at a nylon bag, hung motionless in the air,

“Harr!” Akionla glanced at a hooded figure in the distance.

He gasped, his legs started to tire. In the middle of the road; he realized he and Ibrahim were not the only thing still moving. He turned in a slow circle. The raindrops near his face did not touch him. A plastic bottle that had been tumbling along the gutter hung tilted in the air, perfectly still. His own breathing sounded obscenely loud.

“Ibrahim?” His voice came out thin.

No answer.

Something shifted in the deeper dark between buildings.

It did not step into the light. The shape was cryptic, a low and heavy carriage; the suggestion of limbs that bent in all directions bone should not allow. It moved slowly, creeping in the dark, as if it had all the time that had just been taken from everything else.

Akionla ran.

The figure did not chase him. Akionla kept running. Until his body finally gave in, he collapsed. The figure advanced at an unconscious Akionla. There was no roar, no warning cry. Only the sound of impact and the brief, startled noise Akionla made before it ended. The creature held him off the ground for a moment, then dropped what remained and stood over it, head tilted.

Further down the street, pressed into the shadow of a parked danfo. Ibrahim watched and could not look away.

Ibrahim could not move. Not because time had stopped for him, but because pure terror had locked every muscle in place.

The creature’s head turned in his direction.

It stared, then melted back into the dark between the buildings as the rain began to fall again and the sounds of the night returned in a sudden gasping rush.

Ibrahim stayed where he was, long after the street had come back to life. His hands were shaking.

He uttered nothing but one word. “How?”

Dr. Collins stared at the readings without expression.

“Shut it down,” he said quietly. “And find out what just crossed through.”

***

Morning light cut through the thin curtains. The Ceiling fan turned in lazy circles, pushing warm air around a room that still smelled faintly of last night’s mosquito coil.

Ayo sat on the edge of his bed, pulling on a sock with one hand while scrolling through his phone with the other. He was already late.

From the sitting room came the sound of the television on low volume and the soft clink of a spoon against the mug. John was awake.

Ayo dragged himself out of the room.

John sat at the small dining table in a faded shirt with a university logo. A cup of tea in front of him and a textbook open beside it. He did not look up immediately.

“You’re going to be late again,” he said.

“I’m not.”

“You are.”

Ayo opened the fridge, stared into it as if something new might have appeared overnight, then closed it again. “You sound like Mummy.”

John finally lifted his eyes. The look he gave his younger brother was tired. “Just go. And don’t forget your note this time.”

The street outside was already alive. A woman swept water across her veranda. Two boys chased a tyre down the road with sticks. The air smelled of dust, frying oil, and the sharp green of leaves after brief early rain. Generators growled in the distance like large, unhappy animals.

***

Ayo moved through school hours as usual. Half-listening in class, making his friends laugh, and arguing.

Students poured out in loud, shifting groups. A teacher’s voice cut through the noise, sharp and tired. Somewhere near the road, a danfo horn blared twice in quick succession. The air smelled of arm dust and the sweet-sour scent of overripe fruit from a nearby stall.

“See as I just dodged that man’s cane,” said Joseph.

“Why that man dey chase us like that, that man na monster ajeh,” Ayo gasped.

“Pfft! The man sef no know, he just dey shout reh yeh yeh! Because he won’t make them increase ihn salary.”

Ayo smirked, “But seriously, that man has been year for ten years plus, and till now they never promote am.”

The two fell into step. Ayo walked a little too fast. Every few meters, he would bump Joseph’s shoulder on purpose. They talked as they walked: The mathematics test neither of them had properly prepared for, the new street football argument of whether it can be counted as a goal even if the tyre-post had fallen over, the rumor that someone on King Street had been found dead in a way that people lowered their voices when they spoke of it.

Ayo’s eyes lit up at the last topic. “They’re saying the body was… strange,” he said. “Like an animal attack, but no animal…”

Joseph’s face tightened. “Don’t talk about that thing”

Joseph adjusted the strap of his bag and looked straight ahead. “I know you don’t want to go home with your complete body.”

Ayo glanced at him. For a moment, the teasing dropped away. He saw the real unease under Joseph’s irritation, and he kept quiet.

“Relax,” he said. “Nothing go happen guy.”

Joseph did not answer.

Ayo and Joseph continued their walk.

A woman in a faded dress stood in the middle of the side street, arms flung wide, voice raw and high.

“Hold her! Hold her! She’s mad o! She’s mad o!”

Students turned. A few laughed. Most only slowed down enough to look.

The girl came first.

She was roughly their age, thin, dark-skinned, hair pulled back in a rough knot that started to come loose. Her clothes were plain and slightly too big. She ran with a strange, focused efficiency.

She passed so close to Ayo that he felt the brief displacement of air.

For a fraction of a second her eyes met his.

There was no recognition, no silent plea. Only a flat, burning concentration, as if the rest of the world existed only in obstacles.

Then she was gone, cutting up the narrow path that led toward the low hill behind the shops.

The woman continued to scream. No one moved to help. A retailer shook his head and looked away. Two girls from SS1 whispered behind their hands.

Ayo was already stepping off the road.

Joseph caught his arm. “You’re not well.”

“She needs help.”

“How do you know?”

“She’s running like she’s in danger.”

“Or like she has mental issues,” Joseph said, voice low and tight. “Ayo. Leave it.”

Ayo looked at the path the girl had taken. The woman was still shouting, but her voice had started to crack with exhaustion.

He pulled his arm free.

“I’m just going to see what’s going on.”

“Ayo…”

But he was already moving.

Joseph stood still for one full second, jaw clenched, then sighed and followed. He always did.

The path behind the shops was uneven, littered with nylon bags and the blackened remains of old fires. The girl was faster than she looked. By the time they reached the base of the hill, she had already begun climbing, using her hands where the slope grew steep.

Ayo pushed harder. Joseph’s breathing grew louder behind him.

They crested the rise just to see her drop over the side and vanish between a group of unfinished buildings. A moment later there was only the sound of the wind moving through dry grass and the distant, fading voice of the woman still calling from the street below.

Ayo stopped, hands on his knees. Sweat tracked down the side of his face. Joseph came up beside him, breathing hard, eyes narrowed against the light.

“Ayo, you’re a mad man,” Joseph exhaled.

Ayo stared at the place where the girl had disappeared and smiled, “At least we’ve exercised.”

Joseph looked at him for a long moment, biting his lower lip.

Below them, the woman’s voice finally gave out. The street returned to its usual noise. Students laughed. A motorcycle started. Somewhere, a generator coughed to life.

But on the low hill the two boys remained still, the space between them filled with something unfamiliar.

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