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Gorgeous

"A beautifully written story that captures the pain of lost livelihood, love, and purpose. The villain is diabolical. The heroes are heroic and the love story is heart-wrenchingly tender. The length of the book is absolutely perfect. There’s sufficient character-development and the plot moves quickly enough to keep the narrative clean and concise. There is the interlude where the narrative switches from first person to third to provide a different point of view and as it’s the only one, it feels out of place. There could be other ways relay the same information without sacrificing the style. "

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Brilliant

"Another wonderful story, full of passion. Loved it."

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