What is your opinion?
Very nice
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Echoes of the last encore
"From chapter one I knew this story would be great Keep it up actually it really good "
The Idol Who Never Returned 👀
"I really enjoyed the mystery in this story! Sora disappearing during the final concert had me curious because HOW did no one notice that she was gone?? 😭 Kevin’s investigation is also getting more interesting, especially with people from the industry not wanting him to meet the other idols. It definitely makes me suspicious that someone is trying to keep him away from something. 👀 The journal was probably my favourite part so far. Finding it was already a good lead, but then the writing starting to appear after the coffee incident?? 😭 That was such a good cliffhanger. I also really want to know what happened to Sora’s bodyguards and why they weren’t there when she disappeared. My only real issue was that the chapters felt quite short. Sometimes I felt like I was just getting into the scene and then it was already ending 😭 Some endings also felt a little abrupt, especially earlier on. But I did feel like the story got stronger around Chapter 4, and the mystery definitely kept me reading. Overall, I had a good time reading this and I’m genuinely curious to see what actually happened to Sora. 👀🔎 "
Really good!
"This is really good! I didn't see any spelling mistakes, the structure is good, I got hooked pretty quickly, it's very interesting, all I really have to add is maybe try and make the chapters a bit longer but overall this is really good!"
It has great bones
"I’m liking the story so far! I wish you added more detail to help the reader visualize the characters and setting. However, I would definitely want to read more."
Echos of the last enchore
"Yeah your novel is nice. And i find it quite interesting"
