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A love that crosses oceans — beautifully told

"I just read your poem about the prince and the mermaid — and it stayed with me. There's something timeless in the way you write about love that doesn't care about boundaries. He sees her. He knows what she is. And he chooses her anyway. That's not just romance — that's courage. Your words made me feel the sea. The silver tide. The song. The choice. I was so moved that I wrote a small poem in return. I hope you don't mind. It's my way of saying thank you for your words. He saw her in the silver tide, A secret the ocean could not hide. She sang of depths he'd never know, And still he whispered, "Don't let go.""

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Poems To Allen

"I cannot describe The beauty of concept and wordig used in this poem. When i was studying it i feel relaxed.Any one which is sad and bore must read this. It is fun and peace."

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Keep up the good work

"I am not one for reviews i just wanted to show some love and support be sure to do the same"

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